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Title: Holding On 10 Dec 2022 11:31 am
Reviewer: Buchling (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder how hypocritical the weasleys are in this series. As if Ginny had no part in getting pregnant. It was their job to make sure she received a good sex-ed and knew all the alternatives of contraception. The same goes for Bill and Charly as they are old enough to make sure she knew these things. As it is they are simply pratonizing gits. It is a bad joke to call it protectivness, they are only hurting their sister, who should have read them the riot act already.

    As for the series in general; yes it does feel a bit rushed. First it was about Snape being Harrys dad, then about the pregnancy and then the kidnapping all in a short amount of time. Yet it is interesting. The sequel seems to be a bit slower paced and feels Mord balanced so far. Hopefully you will finish it one of these days. I am looking forward to it for sure
Title: Holding On 30 May 2022 1:30 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Life in a relationship is all about sharing and making concessions to find a comfortable state of togetherness. This chapter highlights that so well. I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story unfolds! Thanks so much for your wonderful and amazing stories.
Title: Holding On 30 May 2022 1:16 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The family rift is understandable, though I hope it’s mended soon. I’m looking forward to the upcoming birth and seeing if Harry can safely play professional Quidditch without being kidnapped by death eaters. I’m grateful for Severus and Draco, and hope they stay supportive. Thanks for continuing your awesome story!
Title: Holding On 30 May 2022 1:04 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a lovely opening chapter. The setting is so peaceful. I loved the fishing scene, and that they’re digging the wishing well for Ginny. Harry’s future looks bright. Totally lovely chapter.
Title: Letting Go 30 May 2022 12:50 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for an amazing read. I loved the story title, and the sequel title. Perfectly fitting.
Title: Letting Go 30 May 2022 12:44 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That felt like a very unique way of dehumanizing Harry and putting him in his place. I liked the creative use of the kitchen that we saw before, as well as Snape’s method of communicating with Harry. Very cool. It was an action packed chapter for sure. Thank you.
Title: Letting Go 30 May 2022 12:26 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that was intense. I love how Severus so skillfully stood up for Harry.
Title: Letting Go 30 May 2022 12:21 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Unexpected twist in the story! I think Severus was compassionate and helpful, though suitably upset. Ron will take a while to come around.
Title: Letting Go 30 May 2022 12:14 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter
Title: Letting Go 30 May 2022 12:05 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Ron’s great moment - I loved it! Wonderfully done.
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