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Reviews For A Little Boy's Second Chance
I think this story has potential! Please continue writing :)
I think deaged Severus is a very interesting topic. It makes me wonder how he will behave childishly, freely.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I have just one thing to say about your story: AAAAAAWWWWWWWWW this is soooooooo cute. Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Yeah, I sometimes have trouble with that, but I'm still a beginner, am I'm working on getting better. :) im glad you like it, and I'm working on the next chapter now. :3
Author's Response: (Spoiler!) it's coming in the next chapter. I'm working on it now and will hopefully have it up soon. Thank you! :D
Author's Response: awww! Im actually at a lost for words! thank you so much! =)
Sorry if I made any mistakes in my review, but I'm not a Native speaker:) Emily^^ Author's Response: I will. =) Its okay. You did fine. lol. English is my first language and I still have trouble with it! LOL. XD No results found.
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