I hope Harry and Sihatha find each other again.
Interesting story so far.. dog house... who would've thought there could be something worse then a cupboard.. yikes. I apprciate the map/layout of the house at the end.
| Title: Rescued
| 28 Sep 2014 10:30 pm
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| Reviewer: rakastettava (Anonymous)
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I really liked this! It is nice that nothing happens all of sudden (a big problem with many abusive!Dursleys -fanfics) and there is room for characters to develop. I also liked how you decided that there must be a therapist to help Harry given his horrible situation.
I hope you'll keep on writing. :)
Author's Response: thank you! I do plan on continuing to write it, the update has just taken quite a while with school and life. It should happen eventually though.
| Title: Before the Rescue
| 07 Sep 2014 11:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry!such a sad chapter thank you
Author's Response: I know, I feel so bad for him! It can be hard writing him like this sometimes.
| Title: Before the Rescue
| 07 Sep 2014 11:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very moving piece showing his frustration and despair
Author's Response: thank you, so glad you felt it was moving!
| Title: Before the Rescue
| 06 Sep 2014 8:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Emily (Anonymous)
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Sorry it's taken me a bit to review, but thank you! This is exactly what I was hoping for. I've said it before, you have so much exploration you can do with Harry, I hope you will continue with this. I really liked that you did it from his relatives perspective in this chapter, it created a great nuance I think. I hope you will continue with this companion piece, even as you work on the full story in Rescued. As always, I really enjoy you writing. Keep it up!
Author's Response: thanks! I'm so glad you like it, and glad this was what you were looking for. As I said before, I considered including it in the original story, but felt like it did not fit as well. I'll update this as I can, it will mainly depend on ideas.
I really like that this story has moved on from the abuse and is focusing on recovery. It's also great that a professional therapist has been brought in and Sev has some training to deal with issues of abuse.
Author's Response: Thanks in so glad you like it! I wanted Severus involved in the recovery, so I wanted him to have some experience, but I didn't want to deviate too much from canon and make him a complete professional. And it would be completely unrealistic to not have some kind of professional helping Harry. The rest of the story won't focus too much on therapy itself but definitely on the recovery. Drawing out the abuse does not make sense in my mind, it doesn't make as good a story. I'm thinking about posting a couple scenes that I had thought up in the course of writing though. I expect only about 4 chapters more for this story though, which means we'll be skipping some through time, so it won't be an incredibly detailed recovery I guess. Hopefully no one minds. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you like it!
| Title: Rescued
| 03 Sep 2014 12:32 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter and I had hoped you would draw the pictures Harry Drew, very clever!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it and liked seeing the pictures! Thanks for continuing to read and always reviewing! It's so encouraging!
| Title: Rescued
| 03 Sep 2014 12:14 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter, I loved the idea of Harry drawing his fears and frustrations, wonderful therapy!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you like it and my idea! I'm no clinical psychologist, and I don't know much about child therapy, but I believe this is relatively common method, using drawings. I'm sure I've actually probably described it pretty far off the mark, but hopefully it at least seeeeems realistic to anyone who isn't a child psychologist. At least that's my hope. Anyway, glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Rescued
| 02 Sep 2014 9:57 pm
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| Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous)
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Wonderfully well written! I love the story line - poor Harry! The drawings are great! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm so so glad you like my writing and the story-line! It's so very encouraging to hear. And glad you liked the added drawings too. I drew them originally to give myself a better picture of what was happening, but decided you might all like to see too.
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