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Title: Harry and the New Time Line (2) 21 Jun 2012 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Lilyflower5 (Signed) [Report This]
    you know the other story you used to have the same as this but with james still as harry's dad what hapened to it
Title: Harry and the New Time Line (2) 05 Feb 2011 12:53 pm
Reviewer: tommysgirl78 (Signed) [Report This]
    what happened to your other story like this but with james as harry's dad please answer me on fanfiction.net
Title: Harry and the Changed Time Line (1) 12 Jan 2011 5:49 pm
Reviewer: Tj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A+
Title: Harry and the Changed Time Line (1) 02 Jun 2009 11:45 pm
Reviewer: soph (Anonymous) [Report This]
    you are spelling moment wrong its meant to be spelt moment not mument
    other then that the story is good
Title: Harry and the Changed Time Line (1) 02 Jun 2009 9:32 pm
Reviewer: ciara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    its very good but its very similer to harry potter and the elixir of time
Title: Harry and the New Time Line (2) 30 Sep 2008 5:43 am
Reviewer: aemilyl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW!!! This was an amazing story. I loved it so much, thanks for such a wonderful and terrific, and believable story!
Title: Harry and the Changed Time Line (1) 14 Aug 2008 10:40 pm
Reviewer: jflame (Signed) [Report This]
    This is my third time reading this fic and i love it. Absolutly fantastic.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your kind words. I'm currently re-writing the whole story (at fanfiction.net) since it was my first story, and the wording etc. was horrible ;-). I hope it'll be better now. You can find it on ffnet under my user name. Thanks :-)

Title: Harry and the Changed Time Line (1) 20 Jul 2008 10:27 am
Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) [Report This]
    You're betas seem to have done a fine job with spelling and grammatical errors, but I think they should help you rephrase some parts in your story. At the beginning of this chapter you used the term "brain battle" and I can think of several ways to say the same thing in a less awkward manner (such as mental battle, or even going into more detail and discussing occlumency). Some of Snape's dialog seems a little out of character as well. I realize you are not a native speaker, but that's what betas are for! :) Other than that, I think you have a good idea, and the fact that you finished such an epic story deserves recognition.
Title: Harry and the Changed Time Line (1) 10 Jun 2008 7:11 am
Reviewer: Lasah (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Now Harry saw red. Not thinking, he picked the remaining ingredients up and threw them all together into his cauldron. Within seconds, the Potion exploded all over Harry, who screamed in pain and was gone with a whoosh."

    XD What?! This has got to be one of the more incredible methods I've found in the fandom of describing the process of time-travel...
Title: Harry and the New Time Line (2) 03 Oct 2007 3:39 am
Reviewer: black cat (Signed) [Report This]
    teddylonglong-

    I must say this story, and the first one, are great stories. I was sad to see that you had started to leave the site but am happy that you came back. Please keep reading and do not let others opinions get you down. If you would like I would be happy to read your stories for context or factual basis, I am a horrible speller and my gramar is poor so being a beta is not something I can do. Please keep writing.

    Black Cat

    Author's Response: Thanks for your encouragement! In fact, I accidentally deleted the first story when I was trying to change the chapters into the new, revised version. Then Jan put it up again for me, but I couldn't change the chapters. So I'm going to delete it again now and put it on again all over. Sorry for the trouble!
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