| Title: Never Again!
| 26 Jan 2023 7:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Im a little confused on the timelines of things. If James and Lily were married (happily so i assume) when Harryvwas born, why does Harry has Severus as a middle name? But also, why let him be her doctor-- did he and James become friends after Harrry was born or before? Also, not to be nitpicky, its just that all the Severus praise is a little over the top. It just feels too forced, everybody in this story loves Severus oh so much and he's apparently super sexy (so no greasy hair or crooked yellow teeth i hope) and hes the best doctor and potioneer ever
| Title: Never Again!
| 08 Jan 2023 5:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I mean i get why but severus is such an unlikeable arsehole in this story. Honestly, he's only likeable when harry and matt are talking about him; when hes awake and talking, my only thought is like f*** him
I feel likeI am reading a Sparks book😫 so we’ll written👍
Great story, enjoyed it.. Harry is like a super kid. He learns his lesson in record time and never makes the same mistake again.
| Title: Lily's Valentine
| 05 Jan 2019 11:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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So funny and so sad thank you
| Title: Harry Potter & the Monster Under the Bed
| 06 Oct 2018 4:48 am
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| Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed)
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love the creature! like how they find out, what draco was up to.. like narcissa use the old slipper on her son!!
I BLOODY WELL KNEW IT!!! I KNEW THAT HARRY'S MAGIC WOULD MAKE A DAMN DIFFERENCE!!!!
GREAT CHAPTER! Keep writing! Be happy!
Good for you Severus! You never know when you might get lonely. You might have found 'the one' again.
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