| Title: Part the first
| 14 Nov 2013 11:32 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Oh, man! You stopped it THERE? Eight YEARS ago??! This was an awesomely-creepy opening chapter, Jan! Would you please consider continuing the story? I really want to find out what happened before and what's going to happen next! It doesn't even have to be for Halloween-- people who love a dark, scary tale would read this ANY time of the year. Pretty please? With a pumpkin pastie on top? ;-)
Author's Response: Oh wow, I hadn't realized it's been 8 years!?!?! I'm definitely going to continue. Just as soon as I catch up on homework. :(
You've done a pretty decent job at making it scary. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I will try to write more this fall if I can figure out how to write horror. :)
Snape is definitely a teacher! Well written. (:
Author's Response: Thank you! I will update this story sometime, but I'm not sure when.
OO! oooooo!!!! You can't leave it there!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry! I am going to update it sometime, I'm just not sure when. Thanks for your interest!
| Title: Part the first
| 01 Nov 2006 2:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous)
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Oooh, I like this story! It's really creepy and intriguing. I hope you can continue it sometime.
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't know when I will be able to. I have to get into a very dark and horror mood to do it, which I don't like very much, but next time i'm in that mood I'll try. XD
| Title: Part the first
| 13 Nov 2005 5:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Laura (Anonymous)
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Oh, I like the mystery setting and mood already. I don't know, but something about the way Snape exlaimed "Why do you never listen to me?" sounded so frustrated and long suffering and personal; I really liked that line in the context.
I hope you will continue with this?
Author's Response: Thanks. :) After I have everything fixed on the archive I plan to sit down and spend a lot of time writing.
| Title: Part the first
| 03 Nov 2005 6:48 am
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| Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous)
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great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
| Title: Part the first
| 02 Nov 2005 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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I like it :) Please continue.
Author's Response: Thank you Anna. :) I'll try to to soon.
| Title: Part the first
| 01 Nov 2005 11:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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Interesting begining but could use some work
Author's Response: Oh no doubt. I wrote it in a day and a half on a deadline to post it for Halloween because NO ONE else was posting any fics so then it always falls on the leader/moderator to give everyone something. I didn't really have a story "given" to me like the others, but I tried, and I attempted to make a horror story for halloween, or at least a somewhat scary one. XD I plan to go back and actually get to edit it later, after I come up with the rest. Hopefully, soon, but we'll see with the work I have to do with the site.
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