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Reviews For The White Island
Title: Chapter 1 - The Grandmother 12 Jul 2011 3:34 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting! must read more!
Title: Chapter 1 - The Grandmother 13 Dec 2009 10:37 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow.
Title: Chapter 1 - The Grandmother 02 Sep 2007 9:41 pm
Reviewer: Lyndotia (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really imaginative story. It's definitely outside of the conventional storylines, and that's awesome.

    Heh, the islanders sound like Hufflepuffs -- hard-working and loyal. For some reason I think that the Grandmother was either Hermione or Ginny, although I'm leaning toward Hermione. I don't really know why, though.

    Anyway, I really like it. Keep writing, I want to see what happens. :)
Title: Chapter 1 - The Grandmother 03 Jan 2007 11:30 pm
Reviewer: Celebwen Telcontar (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah... enigmatic.  Please continue, Dina!
Title: Chapter 1 - The Grandmother 20 Jan 2006 10:54 pm
Reviewer: Kirsty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! I came on to see if there was an update on your other story and I found this! :D Read it until the end and I really liked it. Very descriptive, it just...flowed nicely! I liked the last bit where she sailed out to meet the island with a smile! :) aww.Sweet. Hope you come up with loads more magnificant ideas! xxx
Title: Chapter 1 - The Grandmother 20 Jan 2006 6:07 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    I wonder who the three people are: the boy who could fly without wings (Harry?), the man who's heart bled (Severus?) (Remus?), the man who was dead (Deumbledore?) (Albus)?. Is the Moon lily or just a powerful being? I bet that the dog is Sirius. This is a lovely story so far.

     But did you mean for it to be a round robin? A round robin means that anyone else can write a second chapter to it, ir a third, or a fourth, all the way until it is completed.



    Author's Response:

    My dear dear dear Jan_AQ,

    As always you arethe first to give me support.  I just love you!  I am glad you liked it.  It is a new theme for me too and I hope I am up to it.  I also read the chapter more than 20 times to make sure it is right theme-wise, plot-wise, grammar, spellinga nd punctuation wise, and I have to admit I am so pleased with myself for the result.

    Ummm, no I didn't mean it to be a round robin.  I will check in the profile and correct it.

    And no, I am not giving you any clues as to who is who!

    Thanks again

Title: Chapter 1 - The Grandmother 20 Jan 2006 6:03 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Ouuuuu... this is really great so far! Beautiful writing! I like the opening with the children and the island and everything spoken like myths and stories. I can't wait to see what this story will be about! :)

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