Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: First Difficulties 06 Jan 2009 10:19 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL! I like your story so far. One suggestion would be to go easy on the formatting--you've got a lot of bolded and italicized lettering and it distracts from the story, especially the all-caps that you use when Snape is screaming. You'll get the point across just fine with a good ol' exclamation point. I love the plot of this--good work!

    -P.G.
Title: First Difficulties 01 Feb 2006 5:28 am
Reviewer: Sherry (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW!!!!!! Never laughted so hard in my life.  This is turning out to be a fantastic story.

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