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Title: A Shopping Day for Snape 18 Oct 2016 2:21 am
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely story.
    One flaw:
    "..Mr. W., spit your poison," the professor thought PURSing his lips."
    not 'piercing' which means stick a needle or pin through them - hard to do while walking and carrying a baby. ouch, poor Severus.
    'To purse' means to thin your lips with anger or uncertainty.
    If you are uncertain about spelling,
    it is better to look it up two or three times in Oxford Dictionaries.
    Spellcheck is not reliable.
Title: A Shopping Day for Snape 17 Feb 2014 5:44 pm
Reviewer: twin of harry potter (Signed) [Report This]
    it was good for a fanfiction about harry being deaged to a baby and snape being his guardian.
Title: A Shopping Day for Snape 06 Jan 2009 10:28 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I like the ladies staring at Sev in the park.
Title: A Shopping Day for Snape 21 Jun 2008 12:11 am
Reviewer: rockdudette1066 (Signed) [Report This]
    ...the underground to london? Umm...the underground is a type of underground train that only goes round london...it doesnt go to other cities. Lol...sorry i just laughed when i read the "underground to london".

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