| Title: Decisions and Revisions
| 17 Apr 2006 8:32 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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I like your story very much!!! I did have some question regarding your gammar and usage, but after finding out you are Greek writing in English, all I can say is anything I tried to write in Greek would be total nonsense. That makes you more talented than I could ever be! So, I read your story and enjoy your plot. Watching Snape slowly come to care for Harry has been enjoyable. While I find it difficult to consider someone who wouldn't find baby Harry adorable, Snape has had to do a 180 degree change in attitude in roughly 10 months! Lucky Harry was so adorable--after all, despite the abuse from the Dursley's he knew how to be a freind and care for others. Seems to be an inborn trait. I'm surprised that your Harry will not grow taller than he did last time, or even be smarter. After all, in addition to his old memories this time he has someone intelligent caring for him and supplying him with good food. Won't he grow up to be taller and smarter this time around? Remember that he's learning Occulumency as a child in this AU. So if they can change that aspect of his life, why can't they change more? I look forward to seeing how your plot plays out. Please continue!!!
| Title: Decisions and Revisions
| 20 Feb 2006 10:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Miriel (Anonymous)
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Hi, I absolutely adore your story, I read it on ff.net since more then a year, and an update still makes my day :-). I hope you get as much pleasure (or more) of writing it, as I reading it, and keep on writing! Thanks from Hungary
| Title: Decisions and Revisions
| 13 Feb 2006 3:01 am
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| Reviewer: gizmama (Signed)
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Please, please, update very soon!
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