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Reviews For Babies Can Teach a Valuable Lesson
I just read this story all the way through 31 chapters, It's AWSOME!!!! I hope that you update often.
I have enjoyed reading this story for awhile now, and I must say that this fic is wonderfully written. I love the way in which character is portrayed, the plot is beautifully planned. But what really has me on the edge of my seat is whether the Slytherin's will get the protection that Severus wants to give them. I wonder if he can and/or will defy the Headmaster and Ministry and house his students, in one of his homes? Or perhaps since he is Harry's gaurdian he could use the one of the Potter properties? Oh well, Great job on this story and please keep up the good work. I humbly await you next update.
I have read this fan fiction piece and I think its ver good. i cant wait to read the rest
Thanks
I started reading this yesterday, I've almost been reading it non-stop, 'til yesterday at around one in the morning when I almost fell asleep. I like the story, alot. I mean a really lot. ehm.. or something. I'm still kinda tired after not sleeping enough, so this might not be to well written. But, I never thought I'd say this, poor slytherins. If they're not gonna get safetey over the summer Voldermort's gonna force them to become death eaters!!! Stupid ministry of magic. Harry's growing up quickly.. He's already seven? But.. What happened to 5 and 6?? Wow.. I don't think I've ever written such a long review before. Then again, I've never had so much to write about. When it comes to negative things about the story, I don't think I've found too many, a few sentences in a chapter or so back.. but nothing big. But I do think that the last chapter or so has been more focused on Snape's life and much less around little Harry.. Not that it's a bad thing but it seems that Snape has less time to be around Harry.. When is this? what time of the year? Oh, and if I remember right you said that readers could leave their email adress so you'd come back to them that way, so I guess I'll do that at the end of the review. If you don't have time to answer that is completely understandable, and you don't have to. Yeah, I think I'm done.. (Nikkisixx_lover@hotmail.com) :)
Author's Response: As I have said in some previews Author Notes, Harry will take a final dose of Potion when he is between 7.5 and 8 year old that will return him to his final age. I cannot tell you what will take place as it will spoil the fun but let us say Snape is getting much attached to Harry to traumatize him severely from now on. Now what happens? You will read.
Be patient, next chapter is currently written.
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