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Reviews For Just Two Nights
Good, but a little confusing. Hopefully, the next chapter will be clearer since I'm having trouble understanding what has taken place. Please make the next chapter longer so we can get more information. I'm sure this is just a start, so I'll wait to read more before giving any more criticism. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading. Author's Response: Thanks! Will try to write more next chapter, but ack, it's a lot harder than I'd thought.
Author's Response: Will so so once a week, at least. Thanks!
Author's Response: Ack... I just reread it and realised the sentence structures were all messed up. And thank you (very, very much) for the review ! :) I'll try to update at least once a week, but what does h/c mean?
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad people are actually reviewing this, since I wrote it in an hour of tired, angry insomnia (thus the awful sentence structures and florid adjectives). But thank you for finding it interesting :) I live to whet! |
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