Reviews For Muggleville
Secondly, I am amazed at your portrayal of Harry. I read a few child fics before but usually the child Harry is unrealisticaly mature. I love his childish thoughts.
Finally, about the adults - Hoppity is such a joy to read about, and the melting of Severus Snape is nicely developed. Whatever will he do when they return?
I think the linquistic mistakes are the only thing I don't like. Thank you for writing it!
Thanks a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading about the characters. :)
Snape never changed his views on Harry in canon after those images, so I think it's more in canon to stick to it until new things happen in a way to make it believable. :)
I don't think Dumbledore knows about the Dursleys, not really, but even if he did I don't think he would tell Hopptity.
Author's Response: Yes, they aren't supposed to, but old habits die hard. :) And Snape's a jerk. Just because Dumbledore lets Harry do something doesn't mean that Snape will. :) In any case, Harry was on a miniture trampoline at Hogwarts, which doesn't lead to the same flipping and possible injuries. thanks for your comments.
It's that darned metal that confuses everything. The metal is spelled like the PRESENT tense, BUT PRONOUNCED like the PAST tense. Sorry if I was tedious--I only hope I led you to the right spelling.;-)
Author's Response: Yeah, I haven't beta'd the work. Whenever I reread the chapters I find little typos and mistakes but I decided to spend my time writing more chapters rather than going back. Eventually I'll get to it. I'm glad that you like the story. :)
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