Reviews For Muggleville
Secondly, I am amazed at your portrayal of Harry. I read a few child fics before but usually the child Harry is unrealisticaly mature. I love his childish thoughts.
Finally, about the adults - Hoppity is such a joy to read about, and the melting of Severus Snape is nicely developed. Whatever will he do when they return?
I think the linquistic mistakes are the only thing I don't like. Thank you for writing it!
Thanks a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading about the characters. :)
Snape never changed his views on Harry in canon after those images, so I think it's more in canon to stick to it until new things happen in a way to make it believable. :)
I don't think Dumbledore knows about the Dursleys, not really, but even if he did I don't think he would tell Hopptity.
Author's Response: Yes, they aren't supposed to, but old habits die hard. :) And Snape's a jerk. Just because Dumbledore lets Harry do something doesn't mean that Snape will. :) In any case, Harry was on a miniture trampoline at Hogwarts, which doesn't lead to the same flipping and possible injuries. thanks for your comments.
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