Goat Rebellion!!!!! 😆 Honestly, Hoppity and Harry probably share some common ancestor who has a massive storytelling gene... I was guffawing loudly as I read through Hoppity's tale!
Goats? Hm, well, I guess she is related to Aberforth, too. ^^
A goat rebellion? Gee, it's a good thing they had their tea before than one came out. Also, good that Harry had the tea so he didn't lose it.
Author's Response: Hehe, the story Hoppity came out with for the soial workers was so bizare, but the weirder the story, the more it is likely to be truth, right?
Haha goat rebellion, how did you even think of something like that? Lol, i love this story
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Haha, I have no idea... I think I tried to come up with the most bizarre reason...
Oh my goodness, that was hilarious. Goat rebellion...
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Hoppity certainly knows how to spin a good yarn! LOL! What a hoot!
Tracy
Author's Response: Hehehe, yup! :) Thanks!
Somehow I missed reviewing for this chapter and reading it too, so I read it yesterday, and let me just say it was fabulous! I loved how Snape was so 'nice' to Harry and held him on his lap and carried him and everything. Bet he and Harry were glad when that was over. Still, I can see Snape slowly softening towards Harry a bit, but still staying in character. Great job again, and I have read all the way up to chapter 21, and it's awesome what you've got! I really hope you can update soon and please continue with this story, because it's awesome! It's one of my favs!
Author's Response: Woot! Thanks. :D I'm soo glad that you are enjoying it! I'll be sure to keep going as long as I have readers like you.
Title: The Visit
| 12 Jul 2006 8:56 am
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Reviewer: violet (Anonymous)
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i love the image of snape holding harry in his arms and harry laying his head on his shoulder. so cute.
Author's Response: Me too! :) Thank you.
Please update this soon!!! Harry is adorable, and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Done! :D
Wow I love your story. I hope you're still working on it. (I see you haven't updated in awhile). So now for a worthy review... For starters, I loved how Snape got sick on the airplane! In fact, I like how you portray Snape in the whole story. His driving skills, like an old woman lol! I like your original character a lot, especially how she stands up to Snape and is so nice. Oh and then the visit, the goat rebellion... I laughed hysterically! Also, I really enjoyed the 'family' dynamic. I look forward to an update, I noticed you have lots of plans for the story and I'd really like to read the rest...
Author's Response: Yes, I am still working on it. I just don't seem to be able to sit down and actually loose myself with writing it. I will try though! Thank you for sharing what you liked! That helps remind me of what's in the story and where it's going. :)
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