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Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 06 Mar 2015 2:59 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Hoppity is an odd name but she sounds like a Hoppity. She has that Dumbledore eccentricity. I look forward to seeing how well she relates to Muggles.

    Author's Response: Thank you for giving her a chance!
Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 26 Dec 2008 8:36 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    She does sound like she's related to Dumbley, all peppy and such. I think she's going to drive Snape even more crazy than Potter will on this little journey. I can't wait to see what happens!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Haha, you are right! :) Thank you!
Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 19 Sep 2007 3:34 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Hoppity is a great character--she sounds like she's going to be lots of fun, and a perfect spoil for Snape.

    She and Arthur Weasley should meet--they'd really get along, and they could have such fun comparing Muggle artifacts.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Oh, what a great idea! Perhaps Hoppity and Arthur Weasley will get together one day and talk Muggle "artifacts".
Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 26 May 2007 4:43 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    First let me say this is not a flame, but I thought I would point out a couple inconsistances. This was still a good chapter and Hoppity seems to be a very interesting character and I can only imagine how Snape will react to her. But Albus tells Hoppity that he has to hide two people in the muggle world. Then not only does she ignor the fact that he said 'hide' (Ex; what exactly do they need hiding from. We know but she doesn't.) Also Albus says two people but in the last line it sounds as though he's still searching for the third person. As I said this is still a good chapter and I certianly didn't mean this to sound harsh. Anyway, On to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks, critiques are more than certainly welcome. When I revise this chapter, I will keep your comments in mind! I don't think that Hoppity really thinks about inconsistencies, especially when it's Dumbledore talking. She's not meant to be the brightest crayon in the box.
Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 13 Apr 2007 4:01 pm
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Jan,
    I adore your OC! And I hardly think of her as a Mary-Sue! I dare say that one cannot be related to Dumbledore and not be both very sweet, well meaning and a little odd. LOL!
    Lovely hon!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: Great! Exactly, she's definitely related to Dumbledore.
Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 29 Sep 2006 8:20 pm
Reviewer: Kirinin (Anonymous) [Report This]

    "....people would think me of favouritism". I like this story... there are some typos, tho. Do you have a prereader?

    Having Dumbledore as a relation DOES explain everything. I like Hoppity so far.

    -K



    Author's Response:

    Favouritism is not spelled wrong. I use British spelling.

    No, I do not use a prereader. Please point out the typos so that I can correct them, however kindly do not point out British/American spelling differences unless I use the American one as I will ignore any British spelling uses pointed out as "mistakes". :)

Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 25 Nov 2005 6:16 pm
Reviewer: phantomsgirl04 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh my...how in the world did I manage to forget a name like Hoppity Clementine Smirkett! LOL!!! I couldn't remember it to save my life, but it is CERTAINLY a memorable name...I loved this line:"Yes, quite. I do feel as if a little decoration on one's robes is ever so nice. If you ever tire of listening to an official you could just watch a star or moon float by." It is so quinetessially Albus...Tehe...Oh, and this! "Really?" Well of course he had known that, but sometimes when he acted as if he was uninformed or senile people tended to supply him with more information.-so true! Great characterization of Albus in this chapter...he's manipulative, but not in an evil way-but he does get what he wants...and Hoppity does NOT come off as a Mary Sue, neither here nor in future chapters-it's as you said-her eccentric behavior can be blamed on her relation to Albus-and she certainly has her flaws...Great chapter-the introduction to your OC was nicely done...and next chapter, I think I have some Severus to look forward to!

    --Amber



    Author's Response: Aw, thanks!! :D *dances around* I love reading lines and stuff in reviews becasue I totally forget them and then it's like reading them again for the first time. Thanks!
Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 28 May 2005 2:34 am
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed) [Report This]
    hehe Hoppity sure is a happy gal in this chappie. It seems like she mellows out a bunch in your later chapters. (I'm rereading the story as I type this, hehe). I think she's fun... a bit odd (like DD!), but it makes perfect sense to balance things later on in the story.

    Author's Response: Yeah thanks for pointing that out about Hoppity. I think that i like her mellower, or that it's too crazy to have her be as crazy as she was at first. XD I'll have to watch it and make sure that she doesn't deviate too much from her roots though. Thanks for your review!
Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 25 Jan 2005 1:07 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    hehe. she is her name. no other words for her. Hoppity is hoppity all the way.

    Author's Response: Hehehe... now do you think more of a frog or a rabbit when you hear that name?
Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor 24 Jan 2005 5:26 am
Reviewer: Molly Morrison (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh, Hoppity. I love your anti-Mary Sue. It's a nice touch that she's so obviously ludicrous, in the way that Mary Sues are underlyingly. :-) So many fun lines that make me smile, in this chapter! :-D Oh, by the way--hate to bug you about this, but I think I'm going to have to start giving classes on punctuation, since I'm a professional nitpicker. ;-) You have two common problems: a complete lack of hyphens, and the always popular run-on sentence. Ask me what I mean, and remind me that I found lots of ready examples in chapter 2, and I'll teach you like I did Corbin. ;-)

    Author's Response: Haha, you can be the puncuation Big Sister! Wheeeeeee!!! Lack of hyphens? You are a hyphens supplier. :P No hyphens! Tell me about these run-on sentences. I KNOOOOOWW that I use them, I just don't always figure out how to fix them.

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