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Reviews For Muggleville
Author's Response: Absolutely spot on! Thanks for noticing and commenting!
I am surprised that Harry didn't ask who he was going with before he deaged himself. Not so smart on his part. I think I'm really going to like this fic--good work! -P.G. Author's Response: Ah, I didn't really think about who was the leak, but perhaps I can use that for an interesting twist in the sequel. :) Thanks! I don't think that Harry is always the smartest about things, but he tries. Thanks for your review!!
I bet Harry is just adorable--I'd love to see him as a six year old. Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you! More is forthcoming. :)
Author's Response: Awesome. Thanks so much for your comments! :)
Author's Response: Yup, Dumbledore can move fast when you wants to. Thanks for your comments! :)
Again, I love the idea of Harry having a chance at some happier memories of his early childhood and it sounds like already the potion is doing just that. Tracy Author's Response: Yup! It sure is. Harry is already different, and more able to enjoy himself. Should be fun. *evil grin*
Ah, a Harry POV chapter...I quite liked the description of his side of the battle-we heard from Dumbledore, and now we hear from Harry-his feelings were open, which is a common thing with him...and I noticed the apprehension about the Portkey-I don't think, in canon anyway, that Harry will ever truly be comfortable traveling that way...oh and this: "He hoped that Dumbledore had some children's clothes that were less crazy than the old man's robes." Poor Harry-can you imagine: he has to wear Dudley's old huge handmedowns, and then, he has to wear a copy of Dumbledore's crazy Wizarding robes! Too funny! Luckily, that's not the case...and YEA for a trampoline! Although, I rather lost my love for one after I broke my ankle jumping...Excellent chapter, as always-I liked your description of both the potion and the change that accompanied it. Harry's curious thoughts seemed to be supressed as a teenager-but they certainly came out as a kid! Hey, this sounded a little weird..."the only time Moody had moved from his spot was to inspect the house elf and tray that had been brought Harry his dinner earlier"-you might consider rewording it... Author's Response: Ack! You broke you ankle... wow. I unfortunately can't jump on trampolines very much myself, I'm sensitive to free fall (it hurts) so I can go on for a little bit before it gets to be too much. Yeah and imagine Harry in Dumbledore's robes.. I should so write something with that. :) Yeah that last sentence was weird, I must have spent 5 minutes trying to get it right when I first wrote the chapter, "the only time Moody had moved from his spot was to inspect the house elf, and the tray it had been carrying, when it brought Harry his dinner earlier." how's that? Thanks so much for you review! :D
Author's Response: Hehehehe.... How did you know? *zips lips*
Author's Response: You know, when you said a "widdle Harry" I thought you said a "widdle wet Harry"! Hahahaa... that would be cute though...
Author's Response: Yeah, a lot of people don't think that either but I thought that it would be funny to have in the Author's Notes. Yay for soothing child Harry senses! |
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