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Title: The Deaging Potion 06 Mar 2015 3:13 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the description of the taste of the potion - like sunshine, grass, swing sets and excitement. Things I loved as a child. I also liked that things looked bigger to Harry. It's always a shock to me when I see something that I remember as a child now when I am an adult and am stunned how much smaller it is than I remember years ago.

    Author's Response: Absolutely spot on! Thanks for noticing and commenting!
Title: The Deaging Potion 26 Dec 2008 9:55 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Wouldn't it be ironic if Remus was the leak? After all, he did visit Harry at his house during the summer. Madeye has always creeped me out though, so I suppose he could also perhaps be the leak.

    I am surprised that Harry didn't ask who he was going with before he deaged himself. Not so smart on his part.

    I think I'm really going to like this fic--good work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Ah, I didn't really think about who was the leak, but perhaps I can use that for an interesting twist in the sequel. :) Thanks! I don't think that Harry is always the smartest about things, but he tries. Thanks for your review!!
Title: The Deaging Potion 21 Sep 2007 8:00 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter again! It's nice to finally see a potion that tastes good--seems like most of them are quite nasty. Then again, considering the ingredients that go into them, what can you expect?

    I bet Harry is just adorable--I'd love to see him as a six year old.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! More is forthcoming. :)
Title: The Deaging Potion 13 Jul 2007 11:15 pm
Reviewer: TrustSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL, a mirror and a trampoline, I love it. Albus is starting Harry out right for his latest adventure. I have a clear picture set in my mind of a little Harry sifting either the mirror or the trampoline so he can watch himself bouncing up and down. At first he would analyze the whole thing but then just sit back and enjoy it. Lovely.

    Author's Response: Awesome. Thanks so much for your comments! :)
Title: The Deaging Potion 26 May 2007 5:03 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I especially like how fast this is happening. Harry was just attacked and in less then 24 hours Dumbledore has a plan set into action. It seems very Dumbledore like. Anyway, (and I'm sure you're tired of hearing this, but...) on to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yup, Dumbledore can move fast when you wants to. Thanks for your comments! :)
Title: The Deaging Potion 13 Apr 2007 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Jan,
    Again, I love the idea of Harry having a chance at some happier memories of his early childhood and it sounds like already the potion is doing just that.
    Tracy

    Author's Response: Yup! It sure is. Harry is already different, and more able to enjoy himself. Should be fun. *evil grin*
Title: The Deaging Potion 25 Nov 2005 8:23 pm
Reviewer: phantomsgirl04 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Ah, a Harry POV chapter...I quite liked the description of his side of the battle-we heard from Dumbledore, and now we hear from Harry-his feelings were open, which is a common thing with him...and I noticed the apprehension about the Portkey-I don't think, in canon anyway, that Harry will ever truly be comfortable traveling that way...oh and this: "He hoped that Dumbledore had some children's clothes that were less crazy than the old man's robes." Poor Harry-can you imagine: he has to wear Dudley's old huge handmedowns, and then, he has to wear a copy of Dumbledore's crazy Wizarding robes! Too funny! Luckily, that's not the case...and YEA for a trampoline! Although, I rather lost my love for one after I broke my ankle jumping...Excellent chapter, as always-I liked your description of both the potion and the change that accompanied it. Harry's curious thoughts seemed to be supressed as a teenager-but they certainly came out as a kid!

    Hey, this sounded a little weird..."the only time Moody had moved from his spot was to inspect the house elf and tray that had been brought Harry his dinner earlier"-you might consider rewording it...
    --Amber



    Author's Response: Ack! You broke you ankle... wow. I unfortunately can't jump on trampolines very much myself, I'm sensitive to free fall (it hurts) so I can go on for a little bit before it gets to be too much. Yeah and imagine Harry in Dumbledore's robes.. I should so write something with that. :) Yeah that last sentence was weird, I must have spent 5 minutes trying to get it right when I first wrote the chapter, "the only time Moody had moved from his spot was to inspect the house elf, and the tray it had been carrying, when it brought Harry his dinner earlier." how's that? Thanks so much for you review! :D
Title: The Deaging Potion 28 May 2005 2:43 am
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed) [Report This]
    If by chance you need it before then and are unable to find me or it, Hogwarts' potions master can always whip up a batch for you.... hehe, Dumbledore makes it sound as though it would be so simple for Snape to create the antidote for Harry. I imagine that such a potion would not be an easy thing to make, even for Snape. I doubt that he'd do it unless he had to, but it would be interesting to see how he acted if he had to make it for Harry before he was able to return to Hogwarts.

    Author's Response: Hehehehe.... How did you know? *zips lips*
Title: The Deaging Potion 25 Jan 2005 1:26 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    trampolines? ouu fun. you know...once there was a big thunderstorm on a memerial day. My friend and I had planned to go swimming at my one cousins. But as it was raining we weren't suppose to. Only we didn't care and wnet and had fun. A trampoline that's wet is kinda fun. hehe. A wittle Harry! yay!

    Author's Response: You know, when you said a "widdle Harry" I thought you said a "widdle wet Harry"! Hahahaa... that would be cute though...
Title: The Deaging Potion 24 Jan 2005 5:47 am
Reviewer: Molly Morrison (Signed) [Report This]
    Actually, I never thought that Harry was going to jump off the trampoline into the mirror, or that Dumbledore intended it. :-P It's probably a wizarding one with wards around the edges so he can't come off it high in the air, anyway. I love your description of childhood here--of the Potion, and the experience of shrinking, and how different everything looked, and how curious Harry was.. so fun! I don't remember my childhood all that well, and what I do remember is for the most part not happy things ( :-( ) so this is a great adventure, and very soothing in a sense. I'm on to read more! :-D

    Author's Response: Yeah, a lot of people don't think that either but I thought that it would be funny to have in the Author's Notes. Yay for soothing child Harry senses!

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