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Title: Welcome to British Airlines 17 Aug 2019 10:08 am
Reviewer: Lemon Curd (Signed) [Report This]
    I always make him wear jeans when trying to pass as muggle because most people I know almost always wear jeans, and if you don't want to be noticed, wearing what everyone does is the safest bet.
    You do have a point about him preferring other trousers, though. Jeans would feel even more uncomfortable to someone used to robes.
Title: Welcome to British Airlines 06 Mar 2015 3:36 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked that the airport and plane ride were written from Harry's point of view. So he primarily thinks like a 6 year old and has to concentrate if he wants to access his teenage memories and abilities. It was fun reading his viewpoint of the experience.

    Author's Response: Yes, it is an interesting situation for Harry to be in. I plan to have the potion revert him to his 16 year old consciousness at some point. We shall see. :)
Title: Welcome to British Airlines 03 Feb 2009 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Chibi-kaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So, being the anal-reader-type that I am, I actually checked when you wrote this (2005) because in fact, the Airbus A380 is the largest commercial jet... and wasn't even unveiled until AFTER you started writing! LOL!

    Author's Response: Wow, how unusual! I had no idea. :) Cool!
Title: Welcome to British Airlines 26 Dec 2008 10:45 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I'm loving this. I'm surprised that none of the Muggles have noticed that Snape is using a quill instead of a ballpoint pen. I hope Harry leans on Snape when he falls asleep because that would probably irritate, which in turn would make me laugh.

    Lol about the tea issue. I guess they'll have to get used to ice tea, which I've heard my Brit friends say is absolutely horrible.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Maybe they did notice but don't care. I didn't really think of it, but that's a good point. :) Thanks for your reviews! You always give me something to think about. :)
Title: Welcome to British Airlines 22 Sep 2007 9:25 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    There were lots of cute little things here! I loved Hoppity and Harry playing with the air vents, and I can imagine Snape's disdain.

    Harry's excitement was so sweet. A first plane trip is pretty exciting, especially for a child.

    Hope the airline doesn't lose the tea set box.

    Author's Response: Awww, thanks for all of your comments! Unfortunately, the tea set was lost. I hope that there will be many more cute things to come! Thanks for your review!
Title: Welcome to British Airlines 31 May 2007 11:26 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    --She smiled at Harry and opened his air vent, blasting him and making him giggle. She moved it around, hitting different parts of his head, and blowing his hair in different directions.--

    I love this! I love all the small things put in this story that are just so true.
    *L* My first time on an airplane, I was 18 and I still did the exact same thing... and my flight was for about the same amount of time too. From Chicago to Austria.

    Author's Response: Yup, I did the same thing as well. Thanks for your comments!
Title: Welcome to British Airlines 26 May 2007 5:38 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutly adorable. Nothing more to say except: on to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Title: Welcome to British Airlines 18 May 2007 7:43 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Those people sure are being nice to little Harry. :) Just a quick point out- you said flight 117 earlier and 177 later. Just a small mix up I though I'd point out. Great story so far!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'll fix that! Okay, fixed! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Title: Welcome to British Airlines 14 Apr 2007 12:57 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Jan,
    I'd say you captured Snape just perfectly! So far Hoppity seems like a wonderful person to go through a second childhood with! With her along, Harry has somebody who shares his excitement and enthusiasm for this wonderful adventure!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: Whooo! Thanks Tracy! Yup, I thought the contrasting personalities would be good, and entertaining. Harry won't be left alone to turn into some sourpuss kid with Hoppity around.
Title: Welcome to British Airlines 17 Jan 2006 6:04 pm
Reviewer: Adrian (Anonymous) [Report This]

    A few little corrections. They would not say a flight to the US. They would specify the city, like welcome to flight ## to Detroit, or Boston, or Washington DC, not the US.

    Next, at the time this story takes place (remember the books are in the past!) the planes did not yet have personal monitors on the back of seats. There would be one main screen in each section with a few smaller screens above certain seats so Harry wouldn't be able to choose what he was watching, there would be one movie.

    Also, planes ALWAYS ask passengers to put their belts on OVER the blankets so that when people fall asleep and there's turbulence, they can see if someone is wearing their belt and they don't have to wake them to check.

    And you forgot the safety talk that is done on EVERY flight. About the nearest escape route, how to use the belt, what to do in case of an emergency, how the breathing masks and floatation devices work, not to smoke, ...



    Author's Response:

    As to the first part- I know that and I didn't mention it specifically on purpose. This is an imaginary town in the US, and I didn't want to have to research and add in another dimension to the cultural differences because although I know what different parts of the US are like (having lived in different regions) I wanted to focus on the general differences between the two countries and not get bogged down on details. This is supposed to be fun, for both me and the readers.

    As for the time the story took place, even though the Harry Potter world is supposed to be in 1995, there are a lot of differences in the fandom perceptions of when it can take place- a lot of people write the books as taking place in 2005. In any case, I remember little monitors being in planes around 2000, so I figured that if Harry's a 5th year, this story takes place around 2000. If I was a year or two early, I didn't think that it would matter that much that anyone would bother noticing.

    When I was a kid, and I had a blanket, the flight attendants didn't ask me to place it under the blanket, from what I can remember. Maybe since the flight attendant was the one doing it, she should have made sure that it was, or maybe since she was the one responsible for that area she knew that Harry had his safety belt on so it was okay. I don't know. I might change it, but I might not.

    I think the safety flight talk WAS in the chapter. I wouldn't have left that out unless you're talking about the second flight or something, and I didn't want to repeat the whole thing in real time because that would have been boring, so I alluded to it.


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