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Title: Snape's Trap 10 Mar 2015 3:14 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder if Snape knew that Harry and Hoppity were going to the bookstore? That sounds like a trip he would have liked, even if they were Muggle books. Harry really is making Snape the bad guy. I wonder if he will get over that?

    Author's Response: I think Harry will always see Snape as the bad guy because Snape is the one with the rules, making sure that Harry is safe and protected, and not doing anything that can be remotely dangerous. Snape will always be strict because he cares. Eventually maybe Harry will figure that out. but Snape does enjoy being a git every once in awhile too. :)
Title: Snape's Trap 12 Nov 2007 12:30 am
Reviewer: xoxamandaxox (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story its really original i hope you update soon xxx

    Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
Title: Snape's Trap 14 Sep 2007 6:02 am
Reviewer: MrsRupertGrint (Anonymous) [Report This]
    HAS THIS STORY BEEN ABANDONDED?

    Author's Response: NOPE.

    In the future, please don't be so rude to post a one line question, IN CAPS, as to whether a story has been abandoned or not. All caps are assumed to be yelling in online communication. It would be much more appreciated if you would privately message me, tell me what you like about the story (or that you like it at all would be nice!), and that you were wondering if I was planning on updating it. I update for people who want to read it. Thank you.

Title: Snape's Trap 07 Aug 2007 8:31 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this story is woungerful! You continue to amaze me

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Snape's Trap 28 Jul 2007 6:30 pm
Reviewer: jharad17 (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing story thus far! I very much like the interactions between Snape and Harry, though I have a couple questions-- what exactly are the lessons that follow Occlumency? Is Snape just being sadistic and cruel, as he seems to be, or is it actually supposed to be helping Harry in some way? I admit to being confused (along with Harry) about whether he's supposed to be following the orders or not.

    I also wondered about the burn on Harry's hand, from the bacon the first day of school. Especially if left untreated, at first, it was likely to be worse than if he'd immediately run it under water, but it wasn't mentioned by the nurse doing the physical, or by Snape when he went over Harry's body later than day. Thought it might make for an interesting sidelight.

    I wondered, too, why Snape and Hoppity didn't just modify the memories of the Social Workers, to avoid all the lies and shenanigans of having to concoct back story for Harry's ill health. Let 'em think they'd checked everything, and it was tip top!

    I very nearly cried when Snape took all of Harry's toys, thinking about how he never had any of his own before, and I was almost certain he wasn't going to give them back. Glad he did!

    Thanks again for a winderful story. Hope you update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Hi jharad! Thanks for your amazing review. No, Snape is not just being the cruel. The Occlumency lessons are trying to build resistance of Harry's mind to any commands Voldemort might send through their connection later on. The meditaton at the beginning is supposed to help him develop clearing and controling his thoughts, which should help him do better in Occlumency later on. Harry is good at resisting the Imperious but he's terrible at Occluding. Snape is trying to help him get good at resisting a sort of mind magic that is like both of them, hoping that it will help Harry with Occlumency later on.

    I forgot about the burn Harry had. I guess it wasn't too terrible, more shocking and that it went away. I don't think that the Nurse of Snape noticed it, but when I revise that chapter, I will try to address it.

    Snape and Hoppity are trying not to use magic. They were told not to, and they don't know if they will get into trouble for using magic on US workers. Modifying the social workers' memories was Plan B if Plan A failed.

    Thanks for taking the time to comment! Sorry for taking so long to update. I hope that you enjoy the new chapter if you are still reading.

Title: Snape's Trap 20 Jul 2007 11:48 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just read the story again because it was so good. I hope there's an update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
Title: Snape's Trap 08 Jul 2007 7:23 pm
Reviewer: Americanpie (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, I'm glad that you have updated. I read this chapter when it first came out, but I didn't have time to review. Did Harry Pull out all the flowers in the neighbors garden? At first I thought he did, but he doesn't seem to remember, is it because he was still a little bit sick? Well anyway, I thought it was a terrific chapter and I hope to see more soon.
    ~americanpie

    Author's Response: Nope, Snape was the one who pulled out all of the flowers. Harry suspected him, but it was easy for Snape to misguide Harry's six year old brain. Thanks for your comments! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
Title: Snape's Trap 21 May 2007 8:49 am
Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was so cute! I loved it! So glad you could update too! I've been waiting awhile for this, and you didn't disappoint! It was worth the wait!

    I just loved all the interaction between Snape and Harry and the boopy trap was priceless, so Snapelike!

    I look forward to the next installment!

    Carrie

    Author's Response: Thank you Carrie! :)
Title: Snape's Trap 02 Jun 2007 11:41 pm
Reviewer: maha (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ok this story it the best i have ever read of harry and snape i'm so happy there was lot of snape in this chapter , thou i would really like to see harry get lost and snape come to help him ,, harry crying and snape embrace him evil i know but i would really like something like that ,, oh please make snape take harry to a doctor soon pleaseeeeeee ,, i liked the time out so much so like snape to punish harry
    please don't take this wrong but one thing i hate about this story is that you take so much time to update please this story is so great and i mean really really great ,, it's make me so sad to wait for you to update please update sooner than before i really like every thing about this story and your writing is so good thanx for this lovely chapter you really out done your self with this sory i can't get tired from saying how much i lkie it
    plz plz plz plz update soon
    how can i put this story to alert when you update plz pm me precious_85_@hotmail.com
    sorry for my bad english

    Author's Response: Oh, Snape will totally help Harry out of a pickle, and they will embrace but it will be much later in the story. Patience, my little Padawan! Thanks for your review! Sorry for taking so long to update! I will try to do better. I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
Title: Snape's Trap 31 May 2007 5:29 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I can't believe I never looked at this story before! I'm so glad to have started reading it because it's so freaking awesome. I can't wait for more. I LOVE de-aged Harry. He's always so adorable!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!

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