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Reviews For Muggleville
Author's Response: I think Harry will always see Snape as the bad guy because Snape is the one with the rules, making sure that Harry is safe and protected, and not doing anything that can be remotely dangerous. Snape will always be strict because he cares. Eventually maybe Harry will figure that out. but Snape does enjoy being a git every once in awhile too. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
Author's Response: NOPE. In the future, please don't be so rude to post a one line question, IN CAPS, as to whether a story has been abandoned or not. All caps are assumed to be yelling in online communication. It would be much more appreciated if you would privately message me, tell me what you like about the story (or that you like it at all would be nice!), and that you were wondering if I was planning on updating it. I update for people who want to read it. Thank you.
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I also wondered about the burn on Harry's hand, from the bacon the first day of school. Especially if left untreated, at first, it was likely to be worse than if he'd immediately run it under water, but it wasn't mentioned by the nurse doing the physical, or by Snape when he went over Harry's body later than day. Thought it might make for an interesting sidelight. I wondered, too, why Snape and Hoppity didn't just modify the memories of the Social Workers, to avoid all the lies and shenanigans of having to concoct back story for Harry's ill health. Let 'em think they'd checked everything, and it was tip top! I very nearly cried when Snape took all of Harry's toys, thinking about how he never had any of his own before, and I was almost certain he wasn't going to give them back. Glad he did! Thanks again for a winderful story. Hope you update soon! Author's Response: Hi jharad! Thanks for your amazing review. No, Snape is not just being the cruel. The Occlumency lessons are trying to build resistance of Harry's mind to any commands Voldemort might send through their connection later on. The meditaton at the beginning is supposed to help him develop clearing and controling his thoughts, which should help him do better in Occlumency later on. Harry is good at resisting the Imperious but he's terrible at Occluding. Snape is trying to help him get good at resisting a sort of mind magic that is like both of them, hoping that it will help Harry with Occlumency later on. I forgot about the burn Harry had. I guess it wasn't too terrible, more shocking and that it went away. I don't think that the Nurse of Snape noticed it, but when I revise that chapter, I will try to address it. Snape and Hoppity are trying not to use magic. They were told not to, and they don't know if they will get into trouble for using magic on US workers. Modifying the social workers' memories was Plan B if Plan A failed. Thanks for taking the time to comment! Sorry for taking so long to update. I hope that you enjoy the new chapter if you are still reading.
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
~americanpie Author's Response: Nope, Snape was the one who pulled out all of the flowers. Harry suspected him, but it was easy for Snape to misguide Harry's six year old brain. Thanks for your comments! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
I just loved all the interaction between Snape and Harry and the boopy trap was priceless, so Snapelike! I look forward to the next installment! Carrie Author's Response: Thank you Carrie! :)
please don't take this wrong but one thing i hate about this story is that you take so much time to update please this story is so great and i mean really really great ,, it's make me so sad to wait for you to update please update sooner than before i really like every thing about this story and your writing is so good thanx for this lovely chapter you really out done your self with this sory i can't get tired from saying how much i lkie it plz plz plz plz update soon how can i put this story to alert when you update plz pm me precious_85_@hotmail.com sorry for my bad english Author's Response: Oh, Snape will totally help Harry out of a pickle, and they will embrace but it will be much later in the story. Patience, my little Padawan! Thanks for your review! Sorry for taking so long to update! I will try to do better. I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
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