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Title: Who Hurt Him? 17 Aug 2019 5:19 pm
Reviewer: Lemon Curd (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape seems to be acting out of character in this, considering he hasn't cared about hurting Harry in the whole fic, and a bruise doesn't hint at a VERY bad injury, not like broken bones. Hm.

    I guess Harry thought that, too, and that's why he doesn't trust him.
Title: Who Hurt Him? 07 Mar 2015 10:58 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Too bad that Harry was so determined not to let Snape help him. It had to hurt and he must have known that the potions master would be able to take care of his injuries.

    Author's Response: Harry is learning more and more that Snape can help and make Harry feel better when he needs it. Maybe it will be cemented into Harry's psyche when he is older again.
Title: Who Hurt Him? 26 Dec 2008 11:05 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm curious about what Severus thinks about all of this.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Perhaps I will write some one-shots, or someone else will after the story is finished, explaining more of Snape's point of view.
Title: Who Hurt Him? 14 Apr 2007 10:56 pm
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    At last, Snape begins to show he cares at least a little bit!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: Yup! I loved this part. Thanks so much for all your reviews! :) I really appreciate reading what you have to say about all the chapters.
Title: Who Hurt Him? 12 Jul 2006 7:41 am
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i have been waiting for snape to figure this out. i really like this story and am looking forward to more snape and harry interaction.


    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, but we'll see what he does with this information...
Title: Who Hurt Him? 01 Jul 2005 5:44 am
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying this story; it's well told with a solid amount of exposition, but it isn't rushed. Definately looking forward to the next chapter

    Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'll try to get the next chapter out soon!
Title: Who Hurt Him? 25 Jun 2005 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Mariposa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! I sat and read straight through this one! It is so good! Snape is wonderfully cannon! And Smirkett is a great charcter to play him off of. I don't want to see less of her, she's so nice to Harry and he desserves/needs it. Harry is so sweet and sad! I love the way you portray him! I just want to cuddle him up even though he's a 16 YO in a 6 YO body. I love the way Hoppity calls him Harry-bean. Its too cute! And how he's behaving like a 6 YO because his mind isn't sufficiently developed. I can't wait to read more! This is one brilliant story!

    Author's Response: Ahh! You like it, you really like it! :D Yay. i'm so glad that you're enjoying it, thanks for leaving me a review! Thanks about telling me about Smirkett, I'll try to keep her involved a little throughout the story. Thank you!
Title: Who Hurt Him? 06 Jun 2005 5:32 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! An update! You are awesome! I knew someone would find out about Harry soon, and the soccer thing was a great way for someone to find out. It's nice to see Snape care in his own weird way. I wonder what he will do now with this knowledge? Cant' wait for the next update! Great job!

    Author's Response: Yay! *hugs you* Thanks for the review! I'll do my best!
Title: Who Hurt Him? 06 Jun 2005 10:15 am
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this chapter a lot! I liked ho Snape reacted when he found out that Harry had been injured. It seemed just right to me. Not too mushy and not too mean. I mean you know... Snape is mean, but at least he is taking things seriously. Kinda a bummer for poor Harry though. Not only does he have bruises, but he didn't even get to play soccer like he wanted. Great job! :)

    Author's Response: Yeah poor Harry. It seems like it ends up with a "poor Harry" every chapter.

    I'm so glad that this chapter worked out for you! Whoooo!!
Title: Who Hurt Him? 06 Jun 2005 5:32 am
Reviewer: RavenRose (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so pleased you finally updated! Yeah!!!!! I really like the thought of Severus having to get in touch with his more caring side (even if it takes a rogue bludger to knock down his walls). Update again soon. RavenRose

    Author's Response: :) *gets ready the canons* Target the walls! hehehe... thanks for your review!

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