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Reviews For Muggleville
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed the dinosaur chess scene. :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! :D
Tracy Author's Response: Yup! Tehe. Maybe they'll do it again... :D
Awww, the chess game was very cute. I'm enjoying this! Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you are! Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: haha, you're welcome. :) To be honest, i have no idea what Snape is going to do with the T-Rex, I'm not sure if we'll hear about it again before the sequel. I wrote in the scene as filler, so it wasn't worked in to be anything in the future. But thanks. :)
Author's Response: Aw, you poor baby! unfortunately, Snape will not tuck Harry in in the next chapter. It will not happen within the next 3-5 chapters, I just checked the itinerary. Sorry, sorry but the bonding between Harry and Snape is done really slowly to make it believable. And what I'm stuck on right now is a big clump of time where Snape and Harry barely have any interaction. I'm stuck on writing a day at school for Harry that's really horrible, an accident, more school and a soccer practice, with two Occlumency scenes thrown in- and everyone knows that Occlumency scenes are the hardest because they have to be in about every single Snape and Harry fic and they get old after awhile so you have to come up with something new and unique every time. But the good news is that as soon as I work out those three days, I will be able to update so much more faster! The rest of the story is basically scripted around every single Snape and Harry interaction i could fit in, all of which are mostly written. So if there's a long scene where Snape has to take Harry to the doctor, or to the park or save him from certain death, it's already written and I just have to write up the short scenes like how sick Harry felt at school or something. Well hopefully. There are still some bits that I have to wrok out. But since you seem like you are going to expire without knowing how SNape will tuck in Harry, i'll tell you: (subject to change) Author's Response: Snape pulled the forgotten chair over to the bed and sat down. "Well, Potter. Looks like an awful mess you've got yourself into yet again." In response Harry just weakly turned his head away from Snape to face the wall. He was hot and uncomfortable and that awful nauseous feeling was creeping back into his stomach. He was almost startled when Snape reached out and resettled the little boy back in the middle of the bed and pulled the blanket back over the fevered body. Harry didn't want them on, and said as much, but Snape just told him to be silent and tucked the blankets in tight. Casting about for something to distract the boy, Snape spied a stack of books. He went through them and pulled out The Velveteen. He had intended to come in here and steal the book to read it later to figure out what he had done wrong by bringing back the boy a stuffed rabbit. This was the perfect opportunity. He opened the book and began to read, hoping that his familiar voice would make the boy drift off. "There was once a velveteen rabbit, and in the beginning he was really splendid..." And i'll try to incorporate as many tucking in scenes in the rest of this story that I can, just for you. They may have to come near the end though. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: thank you. :) okay, I will try.
Author's Response: How did you know?!? O.O LOL. I guess your wish is my command! Thank you and thanks for the review! :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked the chapter! :D Yeah, Harry really IS unspoilable. I'm sorry your review disapeared! Sometimes if you leave a html tag open it eats up the rest of the message, or if youposted your review two days ago, our servers like went offline for a hardware upgrade and probably reloaded our site at an earlier time. :( But thanks for your review! :) |
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