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Title: Harry's Story 20 May 2010 10:25 am
Reviewer: sos (Anonymous) [Report This]
    yay yay! An update!!!!!!!! Whoo

    i want to see Snape at the conference! I'm sure he'll go there expecting to hear complaints about harry's whatever.

    If the teacher says one negative thing about harry Snape will be so harsh. I hope he doesn't make Harry cry again. Maybe Snape will be surprised to hear good things said about Harry.

    I hope 'The Snidget' will be updated soon.

    Author's Response: :) Thanks so much for all of your comments! I hope to update within the next week or two. You'll just have to wait and see what Harry's teacher will say about him.
Title: Harry's Story 20 May 2010 9:17 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    amazing chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Title: Harry's Story 20 May 2010 9:02 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No, don't change it!

    I love a defensive & angry Snapey.

    Author's Response: Too late. I took out a couple of things, mostly the "thrashing" and eating of fingers and toes. We don't want Harry taken away now. But don't worry, Snape will definitely be defensive and angry several more times in the story... :)
Title: Harry's Story 20 May 2010 8:03 am
Reviewer: InvisibleNick (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm sooo excited you updated, wonderful chapter as usual... keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) I appreciate it!
Title: Harry's Story 20 May 2010 7:28 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, Lord, Mr. Ford.

    Harry will apprehended by Child Services in a blink.

    Author's Response: Oh my. Do you think that it was a little too strong? Maybe I should rewrite it then... although this is all in Harry's head. He might not have said or explained all of it, merely given a summary. but it is supposed to send some red flags in the mind of Harry's guardian at least...
Title: Family Meeting 24 Mar 2010 6:50 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    hahaha. Snape is unbending! Love it. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you tabbycat! :)
Title: Neighborhood Block Party 20 Mar 2010 8:25 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...so I've been rereading ever since you updated and I think I missed the part about the 'gold thing' that catches Harry's eye the first time I read. I'm very curious about what it is and I'm really hoping that Voldemort hasn't caught onto where he is. I hadn't really thought of that as a possibility for this story because of how far away they are, but I suppose it could happen. That or American wizardry is monitoring them because of their use of magic in their country. I hope we hear more about it soon.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Ah, you noticed! :) I put hints of things in every once in awhile. I'm sure the hints would work better if I updated more frequently, but you should learn about the gold thing next time. That is, if it works out right. Snape has some unfinished business from the last chapter, which may take over and make itself a new chapter. I'm not sure what Snape's after yet, we'll have to wait and see!

    They are pretty far away from Voldemort, but there may be other people they should be watching out for. In any case, not all is as it seems.

    Thanks for your comments!

Title: Family Meeting 19 Mar 2010 11:06 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    It is funny that the characters do what they want, regardless writer´s intentions, right?
    I think I will reread the story, it is so long since I started reading... I think I forgot some things.¨
    Mila

    Author's Response: Thanks Mila. :) I was thinking of rewriting the story myself. it's been so long, I am sure that I can improve it, and I'd like it to be easier to read before I finish it. Thanks for keeping up with my story and for your feedback!
Title: Family Meeting 19 Mar 2010 4:46 pm
Reviewer: Mahua (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story. Love the Sev-Harry interaction in this chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you Mahua!
Title: The Mall Trip 18 Mar 2010 3:15 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm not sure if its a good thing that Harry is starting to forget his memories. Wouldn't it be more painful when he does age back to have all those true memories come hurling back at one time trying to fit in with what has happened during the current summer?

    Author's Response: I am counting on it. :) Although he won't have too much difficulty with the memories, it will be more a problem with nightmares. Nice insights. Thanks for you comments!

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