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Reviews For Muggleville
i want to see Snape at the conference! I'm sure he'll go there expecting to hear complaints about harry's whatever. If the teacher says one negative thing about harry Snape will be so harsh. I hope he doesn't make Harry cry again. Maybe Snape will be surprised to hear good things said about Harry. I hope 'The Snidget' will be updated soon. Author's Response: :) Thanks so much for all of your comments! I hope to update within the next week or two. You'll just have to wait and see what Harry's teacher will say about him.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I love a defensive & angry Snapey. Author's Response: Too late. I took out a couple of things, mostly the "thrashing" and eating of fingers and toes. We don't want Harry taken away now. But don't worry, Snape will definitely be defensive and angry several more times in the story... :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) I appreciate it!
Harry will apprehended by Child Services in a blink. Author's Response: Oh my. Do you think that it was a little too strong? Maybe I should rewrite it then... although this is all in Harry's head. He might not have said or explained all of it, merely given a summary. but it is supposed to send some red flags in the mind of Harry's guardian at least...
Author's Response: Thank you tabbycat! :)
-P.G. Author's Response: Ah, you noticed! :) I put hints of things in every once in awhile. I'm sure the hints would work better if I updated more frequently, but you should learn about the gold thing next time. That is, if it works out right. Snape has some unfinished business from the last chapter, which may take over and make itself a new chapter. I'm not sure what Snape's after yet, we'll have to wait and see! They are pretty far away from Voldemort, but there may be other people they should be watching out for. In any case, not all is as it seems. Thanks for your comments!
I think I will reread the story, it is so long since I started reading... I think I forgot some things.¨ Mila Author's Response: Thanks Mila. :) I was thinking of rewriting the story myself. it's been so long, I am sure that I can improve it, and I'd like it to be easier to read before I finish it. Thanks for keeping up with my story and for your feedback!
Author's Response: Thank you Mahua!
Author's Response: I am counting on it. :) Although he won't have too much difficulty with the memories, it will be more a problem with nightmares. Nice insights. Thanks for you comments! |
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