| Title: Secret Accident
| 07 Jun 2006 5:51 am
|
| Reviewer: Krazey_Forever (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
Oh yes, an UPDATE! I could run down the street screaming, I'm so happy. Very good chapter, I remember playing soccer at Harry's 'age' - it was chaos - and the Pizza Hut trip after the game, oh I miss those days. Poor Harry having an accident, I felt really sorry for laughing. I absolutely adore your portrayal of Snape, and your OC, Hoppity, isn't an annoying twit like most authors. Great chapter, once again, and I will patiently wait for the next update (not like I have any choice in the matter, is it?)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! And thanks for waiting so patiently. I'm so glad that this chapter reminded you of the days you played soccer and had pizza afterward. :)
That's great! Poor Harry, that would be so embarrassing... I think it's cute that Snape called him Harry in the end. Seems like Harry is getting to him.
Author's Response: Yup! He sure is. :) I hope that you enjoy future chapters as they slowly grow closer.
| Title: Secret Accident
| 07 Jun 2006 4:29 am
|
| Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
2 updates so soon is absolutely wonderful! Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou
Author's Response: Welcome! I'm glad it was so wonderful for you. :)
Love it love it love it!!! Wonderful and well worth the wait!! Will this be posted on ff.net as well?? Cheer-i-o! *~v~*Fallen Shadowed Angel*~v~*
Author's Response: Thank you! :) It will be posted on FFN, but later.
As summer heats up down South, I sure wish we could get Severus to come whip us up something for mosquito, chigger, and tick bites!
Author's Response: hehe, I've often wished for a potion like that...
I read the last two chapter, cause I missed the last one somehow. Wonderfully done and so glad you updated! And hear chap. 20 will be coming along soon? You rock! These chapters were very funny! I love the Snape/Harry interaction and hope there will be more of it soon! Great job! Author's Response: Yup, I just posted chapter 20. Enjoy and thank you for your review! I appreciate it.
Yay! It's nice to see a new chapter. Looking forward to some more.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
| Title: The Splotches
| 05 Jun 2006 6:15 am
|
| Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
YES!!!!! An update! I was wondering if you'd given up on the story. The Splotches. lol. Great job. Is Benny going to be like the Creevys? At first I thought the Splotches were chicken pox. You should have Harry get chicken pox! That would be very interesting, seeing Snape take care of a sick Harry? Has Hoppity or Snape ever had the chicken pox I wonder? If they catch them from Harry, oh dear, that would be miserable. Maybe no chicken pox then. Maybe something else though. Oh well, it's your story, do what you want with it, though, please do not ever leave us hanging that long again. Ever. I didn't like it. UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's Response: Yes, pretty much. It's already planned that Harry will get sick, you can't have a deaging story without a sick!Harry scene! Thanks for the review!
I love this story. The end of this chapter is fantastic. Snape loosening up is wonderful - and he does it in character. How do you manage? I'm terribly jealous. Anyway, I always love seeing updates on this wonderful, wonderful story.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!! :D *claps hand happily*
Very cute. Think I could get a laughing potion? It might help at my house. wonderfully written. IT flowed smoothly, hmm anything else you want to know? The chapter was refreshing (sp?). ;)
Author's Response: :P If only... Thank you for your comments! :D
|