| Title: Let's Play a Game
| 31 Oct 2005 3:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Kira (Anonymous)
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wonderful
Author's Response: thanks. :)
| Title: Welcome to British Airlines
| 31 Oct 2005 4:17 am
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| Reviewer: Kira (Anonymous)
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brilliant chapters, and im sure it will lead to a brilliant story
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Hopefully it will.
| Title: The Situation
| 31 Oct 2005 3:40 am
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| Reviewer: Kira (Anonymous)
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yipps and yeahs, sounds super neat.!
~~Kira, (oh and im the authore of the tricky treat story from fanfiction if you didint know) have a good day!
Author's Response: Hiya Kira! :D Thanks!
| Title: Let's Play a Game
| 08 Oct 2005 1:47 am
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| Reviewer: ERMonkey (Anonymous)
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Why isn't this on ff.net yet? Great chapter. I liked the Snape playing video games part. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Cause I'm not completely happy with the way the chapter came out. I probably won't upload it until the next two chapters are written and I go back and fix it. Thanks for your review!
| Title: Let's Play a Game
| 07 Oct 2005 5:51 pm
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| Reviewer: seri (Anonymous)
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I liked this. look foward to the next.
Author's Response: thank you Seri. :)
| Title: Let's Play a Game
| 02 Oct 2005 4:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Dragon (Anonymous)
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Great Chapter!!! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you Dragon! :) there will be a Halloween fic for Muggleville coming out within the week. And after that, an update hopefully.
| Title: First Day of School
| 02 Oct 2005 12:03 am
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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An interesting story so far, though I have to admit not totaly knowing what to think of it
Author's Response: Ah, don't worry about it. That was just a muddle transition chapter that I didn't really work into it. We'll get to how the story is within the next chapter or two and then the people who like that kind of story will love it and those that don't, won't and will probably stop reading. :) So you should probably wait until chapter 20 to decide whether you want to continue. It will be lots of Snape and Harry scenes, with lots of Harry kid scenes dispersed throughout. I just have to go back and get everything fitting with each other better, the stuff that's already posted and the new stuff. Man, I didn't know that it would be this hard when I started, but i guess that's what happens when you take material that it a year and a half old and try to make it fit with your new writing style, new scenes, and a new direction the story has ended up taking. Okay, I need to actually stop talking and go work on that now. XD Thanks for your review!
| Title: Let's Play a Game
| 28 Sep 2005 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Carrie (Signed)
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Cool, an update. I think I read part of this before, so I guess you added to it? Anyway, great job. Would have liked to have seen a bit more Snape/Harry, but I liked what was there.
Can't wait for more soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, I posted the first scene like a month ago. This part of the story was really hard, i would have liked to see more Snape and Harry interaction as well but what I had written down earlier.. it was just a muddle through and I just needed to get through it so that I can get into my stride of how the rest of the story is going to be like. I originally wrote all the Snape and Harry scenes more than a year ago, so I'm taking old material and trying to wrap it up into a cohesive story with the way the story has grown. It will probably be more of a "scene here", cute stuff "scene here" "aw poor Harry" type of the rest of the story but i need to get back and somehow get everything to blend and work RIGHT, something that I'm not up to right now as I really need to get the future stuff out first before I could see where I needed to meld it, lol. But thank you so much for your review. :) I'm glad you were able to be patient and get through it.
| Title: Let's Play a Game
| 28 Sep 2005 8:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous)
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haha. Wonderful chappie! hmmm I liked the soccor game w/ the coach...I didn't cae for my coach when I was 6 so...;) and the school scene was good! You did it wonderful after all that silly worry. :D get writing the next chappie.
Author's Response: Thanks Angie. :) you always know what to say to make me feel better. *sigh* I'll just come back to this chapter after I finish number 20 and fix it all.
It is now official that you are ythe nicest, coolest author of all time. I can't believe that you not only responded to my review, but gave me a bit of a..."sneak peek"? hahaha. I thought that that was great! I really enjoyed it. I can't wait for the next chapter, but thanks to you I now have something to hope for and I won't end up extict like the dinasours! (What is Snape going to do with the T-rex anyway?) Well thank you again, it was amazing!
Author's Response: haha, you're welcome. :) To be honest, i have no idea what Snape is going to do with the T-Rex, I'm not sure if we'll hear about it again before the sequel. I wrote in the scene as filler, so it wasn't worked in to be anything in the future. But thanks. :)
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