| Title: Chapter 3
| 02 Aug 2011 10:09 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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what about the order members who are watching the house? Where were they while the house was being robbed.
| Title: Epilouge
| 11 Mar 2010 10:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous)
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Hi,
I can't say that I really understand the dream and Snape's role in it. Is it a self-realisation that came up in Snape's voice? Or does it have some other significance. The entire dream sequence Snape is imaginary and actually, Harry's mind working.
Well, I loved the story anyway ( even though, I dont really understand it). It's just so unusually done.
This story is truly unique, I loved it!
Another beautiful chapter! I love these dreams (especially all the symbolism).
I love all your descriptions in this chapter! I can't wait to see where you go next with this.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 25 Sep 2006 12:36 am
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| Reviewer: Rosethorn (Anonymous)
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I really love your style. It really touched my heart(Even though it is SO totally unlike Rosethorn to say). But, the poem by frost was the thing that hit me the most. beautiful poem. it was my grandmothers fav. *sigh* I really like it.
OMG. I LOVED this. So much feeling, and it makes so much sense, it was perfect.
| Title: Epilouge
| 14 Jun 2006 5:55 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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There was a lot of symbolism. I'll need to think about this one for some time. Most Fan fictions hit you over the head with clear plots, or no plots. You're lucky to recognize forshadowing once in a while. This one is a thinker--and I hate those. I'm always reminded of the ending of Lowery's The Giver. Obviously Harry wins or no one would be interested in reading about his life. How he did it is not addressed other than in metaphore. As I said, something that has to be though about. At least you left us with the understanding that he did win.
I really like the premise of this story with the poem. We used to have to read this poem in school almost every other year. I even had to sing it in chorus once. XD I love the dream feeling of this story. Thank you for sharing!
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