This was a beautifully written short story. I loved the part about Harry’s eyes changing over time, and the belt as well. This was a wonderful read.
I am low key crying. Awesome story!!
Title: Dislocation’s Game
| 06 Nov 2018 5:56 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good story I love how you kept Severus in character all the time
Wait and hope ouch that was good!
Found this on Story of the Moment & so glad I clicked on it! I love the interaction between Snape and Harry in both realms, the comparison/contrast between both, and their mutual acknowledgement at the end. Especially, I liked the fact that Harry had kept and WORN Snape's belt through the years. It was the one item he'd owned that wasn't Dudley's first, a gift (as it were) from the only person Harry could remember trying to help him during the hard years of his childhood. I'm sure Harry must have known all along that Snape was his benefactor, even before he suffered the detention injury, and despite Snape's treatment of him since First Year, he still wore the man's belt. That's awesome! Oh, to be a fly on the wall of Harry's brain, knowing that there was far more to the Potions Master than what met the eye...
This was really good. I liked the transition of Snape explaining how Harry's eyes changed throughout the years. That was well done. And innocent, little Harry was heartbreakingly cute.
WOW. This fic was really interesting! You did a very good job with details. I loved how you described his pain and his every movement. Good job on this :) Oh and that quote is a really good one too!
Title: Dislocation’s Game
| 06 Oct 2009 8:46 pm
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Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Hmmm...deep, truly deep. Now why does Eliot sound familiar? Kudos on a job well done.
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