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Reviews For Dislocation's Game
Title: Dislocation’s Game 06 Dec 2022 12:50 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a beautifully written short story. I loved the part about Harry’s eyes changing over time, and the belt as well. This was a wonderful read.
Title: Dislocation’s Game 06 Jun 2021 3:53 pm
Reviewer: MellarkandArt (Signed) [Report This]
    awww so sad and lovely
Title: Dislocation’s Game 29 Nov 2020 3:18 am
Reviewer: Ze Awesome Me (Signed) [Report This]
    I am low key crying. Awesome story!!
Title: Dislocation’s Game 06 Nov 2018 5:56 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good story I love how you kept Severus in character all the time
Title: Dislocation’s Game 22 Apr 2015 7:52 pm
Reviewer: GuiltyFicReader (Signed) [Report This]
    Wait and hope ouch that was good!
Title: Dislocation’s Game 04 Sep 2012 7:55 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Found this on Story of the Moment & so glad I clicked on it! I love the interaction between Snape and Harry in both realms, the comparison/contrast between both, and their mutual acknowledgement at the end. Especially, I liked the fact that Harry had kept and WORN Snape's belt through the years. It was the one item he'd owned that wasn't Dudley's first, a gift (as it were) from the only person Harry could remember trying to help him during the hard years of his childhood. I'm sure Harry must have known all along that Snape was his benefactor, even before he suffered the detention injury, and despite Snape's treatment of him since First Year, he still wore the man's belt. That's awesome! Oh, to be a fly on the wall of Harry's brain, knowing that there was far more to the Potions Master than what met the eye...
Title: Dislocation’s Game 19 Sep 2011 10:49 pm
Reviewer: kdsmashedpotatoes (Signed) [Report This]
    This was really good. I liked the transition of Snape explaining how Harry's eyes changed throughout the years. That was well done. And innocent, little Harry was heartbreakingly cute.
Title: Dislocation’s Game 25 Feb 2011 5:47 am
Reviewer: xVortex of MemoriesX (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good.
Title: Dislocation’s Game 29 Dec 2010 11:53 pm
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW. This fic was really interesting!
    You did a very good job with details. I loved how you described his pain and his every movement.
    Good job on this :)
    Oh and that quote is a really good one too!
Title: Dislocation’s Game 06 Oct 2009 8:46 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm...deep, truly deep. Now why does Eliot sound familiar? Kudos on a job well done.

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