| Title: In Which Harry and Ron Recieve Detention, and Hermione Is Still Annoyed
| 05 Apr 2014 11:34 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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This is a bit intriguing, hadn't considered having an unknown HP would be so interesting. Hope it continues.
| Title: In Which Harry and Ron Recieve Detention, and Hermione Is Still Annoyed
| 15 Jan 2011 7:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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| Title: In Which The Trio Finds Something Ever So Interesting, And Remus Begins A Story.
| 15 Jan 2011 7:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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| Title: In Which Harry and Ron Recieve Detention, and Hermione Is Still Annoyed
| 12 Jun 2010 4:26 am
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| Reviewer: Hedwig's Owl (Anonymous)
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Awesome story. I love the alt-world you've set up and Harry's quest to find his mother is wonderful. I really like the way you write the friendship between the trio.
| Title: In Which Harry and Ron Recieve Detention, and Hermione Is Still Annoyed
| 03 Mar 2008 9:56 pm
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| Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed)
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Great story, I love the plot! It seems a bit strange that not even Petunia knew a LITTLE bit about whoever Lily was sleeping with--then again, she hated Lily for her magic...Oh well, keep up the good work, and update soon!
| Title: In Which Harry and Ron Recieve Detention, and Hermione Is Still Annoyed
| 19 Aug 2007 11:23 pm
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| Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous)
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I do like this story can not wait to find out who is the father
| Title: Chapter 3: In Which Hermione Finds A Book, And Is Severely Annoyed By Her Roomates
| 17 Aug 2007 9:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed)
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I'm really enjoying the relationship you've set up between the trio. I think it's very well done, and your dialog and the interactions between them are very realistic. Hermione is so great. I can totally see what she must go through with her dorm mates. Must be a nightmare for her. :-)
Your dialog is lovely, and the story is really taking. It's one of my newest favorites. Absolutely great!
The only thing I want to mention is that there is no such word as "anyways" despite the fact that it's commonly misused all the time. The word you want is "anyway."
| Title: In Which Harry and Ron Recieve Detention, and Hermione Is Still Annoyed
| 17 Aug 2007 7:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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| Title: In Which The Trio Finds Something Ever So Interesting, And Remus Begins A Story.
| 17 Aug 2007 6:25 am
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| Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed)
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This is an awesome start. This is definitely AU done right! It's believable, witty, and very readable. Excellent work!
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