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Reviews For Another Chance At Childhood
This is good. I like it a lot. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Yes I am, chapter three is already done, I just need to give it a few finishing touches and it´ll be up. I will post it here first, hopefully before the weekend is over.
Oh, wow! What an absolutely fascinating idea! You've really thought this thing through, and the potion and Snape's solution are both very intriguing. How is Snape going to get healed, though, and where are they going to go? They can't stay at the Dursleys, surely, but they don't seem to be about to go anywhere. The Order really messed up this one, didn't they? This is going to be a really interesting story! Author's Response: Glad you like it ;) I did put some thought into the story, but this is actually the combination of two plot bunnies that I had been working on for more than a year. When I saw your challenge I thought it was the best way to use those ideas that I had. To find the answers to your questions you'll have to wait , but they will be resolved as the story progresses. About the Order, they did mess up big time, as did Dumbledore. But you will see why in a few chapters. I already have chapter three done, I'm just proof reading it, and wanted to wait to have at least half of chapter four typed and revised before posting.
That was really well done! I like the way the neighbours were noticing and Petunia was getting worried. Poor Harry. And poor Hedwig! I don't think much of the Order, for saying they'd keep an eye on him and completely ignoring him. Author's Response: On the original draft Hedwig was only hurt, but it didn't flow the way I wanted it. So she had to go. I didn't want her to but there was no other way. As to the neighbors, they really had to be really daft not to notice there were problems in the Dursley house hold, but as it happens in real life too, not everyone is willing to do something to stop the problem. I'm still not sure if I'm going to do more with them, but the idea is intriging and I might still have them do something. The Order in this case is not actually keeping an eye on Harry. They didn't in book six, just the letters, and so I'm using that bit of information. There were no guards outside Privet Drive. The rest will be explained in later chapters.
Mhhh, that’s really interesting looking story. I really look forward to see more of this. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it Jan. :) I really wanted to add something different since Laume's 'Six Years to Life' was such a wonderful story. Besides I have always considered Severus to be a thinker, and not prone (except where Harry is concerned) to do things whithout analizing them through. I wanted to portray that part of his 'personality. I'm working on the next chapter although a have a draft of it already posted in my LiveJournal (I erroneously posted it as chapter two). There will be differences between that one and the final chapter three, but the gist is the same.
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