Sorry. (Not) I wanted to rant and rage. (I am not going to take down my previous review) I saw that you mentioned that you have three toddler children, and well, maybe that too can be a valid excuse for not writing this story. Can you just please, please, please promise to complete this story? Anytime, may it be five more years from now, but please? You should also know that the reason of my rant was because this story is preciously good and I absolutely detest it when people aban-.... Well, lets not go into that direction again. I know I gave you a couple (A lot) of insults but don't take any offence to that please. (I am still not taking down that review.) I am sorry. (Now I truly am, that the Adrenalin is fading.)
Ooooh la la la la la.... I havent even read the whole chapter but I really like it when Harry shows Dumbledore some of what he really is feeling, I recently read another story in which something similar happened and well, I love them! ;P Well, I am adding to this review as I steadily move forward in this chapter and by far my favourite line is :: “With all due respect, Headmaster,” Snape's voice said, “sod off.” Muahahahahahahaha!!! Oh, and did I tell you that I absolutely detest abandoned stories?
Awwww, you aren't going to show us the meeting with the Dursley's anytime soon, are you?
Oh, Harry really is a prat when it comes to relationships, isn't he? Ha, very Ha, that funny feeling and the line Ginny said was just as well she might have said, "I have a crush on you!" But then, Harry had once thought that girls were born with such intelligence, so I guess boys really are clueless.
I don't know whether to laugh or cry. This is a fanfiction, for Merlin's sake and still you go out to kill of Sirius? I know it was important for the plot, but still, well I certainly want to know how his visit to the Dursley's go.......
OOh, I really like this, but please dont kill Sirius, please?
Well, that was..... quite........ uneventful. Yeah, thats the word, nothing much, nothing less, nice. I will have to read more chapters to properly rate this story.
Love this story so far, please finish
Love this story so far, please finish
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