| Title: Heart's Blood
| 30 Nov 2013 12:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Zang (Signed)
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It's painful and beautiful at the same time. The angst is prominent, the lost is wrenching my heart. I'm glad that Snape's there to appease Harry's guilt.
Gorgeous, just gorgeous. The imagery and metaphor you used is some of the best I've read on this site. Thank you for sharing it with us.
| Title: Heart's Blood
| 22 Oct 2007 4:54 am
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| Reviewer: mab (Anonymous)
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Your imagery is beyond compare and compelling enough to make me gasp.
| Title: Heart's Blood
| 08 May 2006 3:29 am
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| Reviewer: Krazey_Forever (Anonymous)
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Wow. Double wow actually. The interaction between the two wasn't cheesy or forced, you let it flow, slowly, like Harry's blood, oozing from his feet. I loved the ending, tied it all together with one very simple yet fitting line.
*sniffle* Evil person. You made me cry. <G> Good answer for the challenge, and I hope to see more stories from you.
This is a beautiful story. I love how you described Harry's feelings of loss. Simply beautiful. :)
LOL, you're so funny. XD Honestly, I didn't read the list of words before reading the story, I thought that "silent" was one of them. Nice story for an hour, Challenge passed!
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