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Reviews For Small Steps
Title: Small Steps 11 Apr 2021 12:09 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it.
Title: Small Steps 27 Jan 2011 4:13 am
Reviewer: Jen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was lovely. I really love how Snape wishes to connect with the family and does, but then only with Harry on Harry's terms. The end is perfect!
Title: Small Steps 27 Apr 2010 4:40 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh... I like this. Quite a different dynamic, having them find out when Harry is older. Well-written. I'd be interested if you were to write more along these lines. Very unique.
Title: Small Steps 08 Mar 2007 9:55 am
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    A very nice story! How about a (longer) sequel?
Title: Small Steps 30 Oct 2006 9:08 am
Reviewer: JoeBob1379 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it :)
Title: Small Steps 04 Jul 2006 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    That was really nice, I've never read anything quite like this; with Harry and Snape finding out so late in the game.

     Very realistic little one shot, congrats!

Title: Small Steps 24 Apr 2006 6:31 pm
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Holy $#!%, that I think was the single best Severus as Harry's father story I have ever read, and I've read a lot of them.  I love the idea of the knowledge comeing out later in harry's life, as well as sneaky Lily
Title: Small Steps 18 Apr 2006 10:50 pm
Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous) [Report This]

    *sighs* no sequel? really? *sighs again* alright, if you are sure...though I'd have loved to see it. But you're correct. it's just right as it is.



    Author's Response: Thank you :) I'd considered making it longer, but I actually have no idea what they'd say to one another, so I stopped it at the door.
Title: Small Steps 18 Apr 2006 4:53 pm
Reviewer: lesyeuxverts (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, very nice .... but why did he decide on "Father" at the end when he'd said it was too formal earlier?


    Author's Response: Nothing is ever easy; 'Father' is as good as it's going to get for a bit with these two. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Title: Small Steps 18 Apr 2006 2:48 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this very much.  You have done a very believable job with this.  I especially liked the touch of the daughter loving potions and the son with Snape's nose.  You mention "brown eyes", though, and I always thought Snape's were described as "black."  I know you were trying for Harry to not really notice anything until he learned of his relationship with Snape, but maybe you could change that to something along the lines of "He now realized that they were really black rather than brown."

    Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story :)

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