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Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Happy 29 Jan 2006 11:03 pm
Reviewer: Hollyowl (Signed) [Report This]
    its a good story but it would be better if your chapters showed up, ch. 19 on dont show up
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Happy 09 Nov 2005 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Nancy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You know, the thing is this is pretty well written: decent grammar, use of english and puncuation.  It would really be a good work of fiction if the storyline and the "traitor" issue weren't so outlandish.  It just isn't possible to believe this many people in one universe would be so densely stupid.

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