| Title: Chapter Thirty-Two: Descent
| 01 Oct 2005 8:31 pm
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| Reviewer: zafaran@f...fm (Anonymous)
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Oy vay. You are getting twisted, and it's getting to the point you need a scorecard to keep track of the characters. I've just finished rereading this from the beginning and then going into the new chapters I hadn't seen. This story is morbidly fascinating. It's also frustratingly disjointed in spots, but I'm not sure if it's a writing flaw or a deliberately chosen stylistic choice. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and update with new chapters sometime soon. Keep up t..astmail.fm
| Title: Chapter Thirty-Two: Descent
| 19 Aug 2005 7:08 am
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| Reviewer: Jared (Anonymous)
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ummm you do know that this ISNT how the Fideleus works in canon right?
Author's Response: hmm...I acknowldge your opinion, but disagree. If you want to know why, check my livejournal.
| Title: Chapter Thirty-Two: Descent
| 18 Aug 2005 10:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Glorfindel (Anonymous)
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Very, very interesting! Lupin missing, Harry missing.Please continue!
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