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Title: Chapter 2 21 Dec 2022 2:02 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I appreciate that Severus is feeding Harry, but am not a fan of asking Harry to cover up for him. I’m on the fence about this version of Snape!
Title: Chapter 2 17 Apr 2011 3:20 am
Reviewer: topsell (Signed) [Report This]
    Your portrayal of Severus and his internal reasoning behind helping Harry is more realistic than I'm used to seeing - and I LOVE it! The selfish reasoning and the none too caring attitude he has towards Harry's plight (at least at this time in the story) is wonderfully done, making the character seem as he does in the novels (and extremely Slytherin to boot!)

    So far I'm quite enjoying the take on these characters and looking forward to reading more!
Title: Chapter 2 20 Dec 2006 2:22 am
Reviewer: liz (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This was the BEST snape characterisation I have ever had the pleasure to read.  It was intelligent and emotive and such a wonderful story.  I'm not sure if it's a WIP or complete but either way thanks for such an insightful story.

    Liz, UK

Title: Chapter 2 05 May 2006 5:11 am
Reviewer: Ari (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Severus seems so cold!  Poor Harry, a mentor like that is hardly worth having.

    Author's Response: I think he'll be warming up to Harry eventually. It will take him awhile - I hate it when characters change very suddenly in fanfics.
Title: Chapter 2 03 May 2006 7:49 pm
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very cool story so far.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
Title: Chapter 2 02 May 2006 11:49 pm
Reviewer: Ljiomi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is just great! Your Harry and Severus are very well written. I truly enjoyed this so far. PLease update soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry it took me so long to update but this past week has been hectic.
Title: Chapter 2 02 May 2006 7:28 pm
Reviewer: Elear Lindar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent. Truly Excellent.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 2 02 May 2006 11:08 am
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This is quite good so far.  Looking forward for more!


    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it; I've now posted the next chapter. Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 2 02 May 2006 5:43 am
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this. Probably one of the best slytherin Harry ones I've met. I like the take you are using. Most people have slytherin Harry as someone who is manipulative.

    Author's Response: I don't think that manipulative is the only characteristic that Slytherins have. Harry might turn out to be a little manipulative in the end but right now he's frightened and disoriented because everything is new to him and he doesn't know how to react.
Title: Chapter 2 02 May 2006 2:00 am
Reviewer: weasly_girl (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Keep writing this is really good!! It would be interesting to see how this plays out. Update when you can I know RL can get to a writer.

     *Real Life



    Author's Response: RL does interfere with the writing, but I am updating as often as I can. Thanks for understanding.

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