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Title: Chapter 5 21 Dec 2022 2:40 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this smart version of Harry. Snape seems to be letting some of his revenge plans go, as he recognizes how futile they really are.
Title: Chapter 5 07 May 2016 6:43 pm
Reviewer: Applefritter (Signed) [Report This]
    I like seeing Draco take an active part in getting Harry to eat, it was comforting to see. My heart hurts for Draco and the abuses he suffers from his father.

    Seeing Harry finally eat something outside of toast feels like victory.

    I hope your friend Steph made it safely through her procedure and is recovered and well.
Title: Chapter 5 16 Jun 2006 6:55 am
Reviewer: Krazey_Forever (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Kinda makes you wonder what the sorting hat saw in Harry's mind, doesn't it? Poor Snape, again, talking to people who aren't there - I half expected a ghost or Peeves to wander by, "Talking to yourself is the first sign of insanity." Ha!



    Author's Response:

    The sorting hat won't come up again for a bit, I'm afraid.

    Snape doesn't really have anyone to talk to though, does he? I'm afraid all of the other profs dislike him because of his temperament and Slytherin nature. 

Title: Chapter 5 09 Jun 2006 1:52 am
Reviewer: Leo (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow.amazing.keep it up. good for you. Update!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you've liked it.
Title: Chapter 5 08 Jun 2006 4:55 am
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    Ya know, I like an intelligent Harry;  it's nice to see that.  It's also fascinating to watch Snape justifying to himself that he is coming to care for Harry - that he wants to care, but needs a reason to do so.  It's an odd way to approach a situation, but then, it's a very Snape way to do it.  Looking forward to the next update.


    Author's Response:

    Snape's exceptionally rational - I see him as an Enlightenment sort of guy rather than a Romantic figure, if you know what I mean. He won't venture any strong emotions unless there's a good logical reason for doing so.

    I like intelligent Harry too ... the canon Harry that's impulsive and angry just drives me crazy sometimes. I hope I'm not taking it too far but I've at least tried to justify it so that makes everything okay .... right?  

Title: Chapter 5 07 Jun 2006 5:06 pm
Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    :))))))))))))))) again another perfect chappy! And even Harry is starting to make some progress, so nice. I like this Severus' "revenge"! Eventually he will change his mind  and really like the boy Harry is. Please write ASAP!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 5 05 Jun 2006 11:51 pm
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this chapter, and the story so far of course! It is good to see Severus struggling with his feelings regarding Harry despite the obvious abuse the boy has sauffered instead of just changing it in a flash because this is much more plausible. Great start, I am looking forward to more! Thank you.


    Author's Response: I don't think any realistic Snape could just change his mind and his emotions in a flash, do you? I'm enjoying using his viewpoint because I think it gives a bit more scope to the interaction between the two characters ... he's more mature (in some ways at least) and thus has more depth to his character that Harry hasn't had time to develop yet.
Title: Chapter 5 05 Jun 2006 11:50 pm
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this chapter, and the story so far of course! It is good to see Severus struggling with his feelings regarding Harry despite the obvious abuse the boy has sauffered instead of just changing it in a flash because this is much more plausible. Great start, I am looking forward to more! Thank you.
Title: Chapter 5 05 Jun 2006 11:00 pm
Reviewer: Candy_Stick (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww our poor little Harry and Draco! I totally love how you have characterised Snape. I dislike the types of stories where Snape discovers abuse, Snape automatically forgives himself for past beliefs and they become the best of friends/lovers, its too OOC. Whereas in your story it is believable and enjoyable to read. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: I dislike those stories as well ... one of the reasons why I wanted to write this. Thanks for the review, I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying it.
Title: Chapter 5 05 Jun 2006 9:11 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]

    This chapter was not quite as emotionally painful to read, which was good.  I, at least, needed a bit of a break.  Something about the way you write this Harry is very painful for me to read.  I mean that as a compliment.  The descriptions and Snape's recognition and realizations of what's going with Harry are particularly wrenching.  I do like the way you're very gradually changing Snape, even as he tries to deny it.

    I'm curious about what you'll do about the canon of PS/SS.  Will Harry have any of the same experiences as in canon?  Will he be strong enough?  What about Hermione and Ron?  Just wondering if you plan to use much of canon.



    Author's Response:

    Yes, some parts of canon will be worked in ... others will be ignored (for what I hope are good reasons). Hermione and Ron will be making bigger appearances later on but Harry's just a bit too unstable to deal well with them now.

    Thanks for the review, I appreciate the feedback! 


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