Wow. Awesome! My favourite parts was how Molly was going to babysit Harry, how Snape went through all of Harry's school work ad then this line, "Snape's been a busy little professor". LOL. Nice development of the plot - I'm intruiged. I like the use of nightmares. Great job on Molly's chararcter. I laughed outloud when Harry looked at himself in the mirror and realized how bizzare he must of seemed saying Lumo. Oh that was such a great part. I bet Snape does know. Fantastic job with Snape and keeping the readers guessing what he's thinking and what his motives are. Very good job.