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Title: Baby Harry 07 Feb 2022 5:49 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    An absolutely darling end to the chapter, thank you.
Title: Baby Harry 12 Nov 2008 8:29 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    cute...
Title: Baby Harry 10 Apr 2007 8:25 pm
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this chapter! Snape is awkward with baby Harry, which is part of what makes it so charming, but he is still willing to comfort him for the rest of the night. Snape isn't leaping to do whatever Harry wants, but is willing to provide what Harry needs when he needs it.

    The depicition of the dream was chill-inducing, partially because you go from such a warm, fuzzy scene to one of such horror - it's quite a jolt.

    The only thing I'd say is that it was better to get Mrs. Weasley out of the way via Ron's injury than the way you were doing it before - by marginalizing her importance to Harry. In canon, Mrs. Weasley is the closest to a mum that Harry has. It was kind of irritating when you made *her* kind of irritating in order to bring Harry closer to Snape. This is better.

    -K
Title: Baby Harry 27 Aug 2006 11:56 pm
Reviewer: youngwrider (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This one was so good!  It made me cry.  Nice job!
Title: Baby Harry 21 Jul 2006 1:12 am
Reviewer: violet (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh! that is the cutest chapter yet, snape finally being human. i love how harry calls him Nape. and this whole idea of his scar apearing and what not is very interesting.
Title: Baby Harry 16 May 2006 10:58 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Aw, that was so sad but so beautiful. Wow. Poor, poor Harry. :*( lovely tenderness in this chapter. I loved the scene with Harry and his parents and the love, it almost made me cry at the end. Wonderful, wonderful job.

    You need to edit your typos though. It's hurting your story overall.


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