| Title: A Painful Transition
| 17 May 2006 1:01 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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WOW!!!! Amazing chapter.
I forgot to mention how much I loved the mentions of Snape and his burnt toast. I noticed that that is what Snape usually eats and it was a nice thing to add in. Makes the story seem like there are more nooks and cranies to explore in the characters. :) It made SNape seem very human. I also forgot to mention how much I adored the way the Order members passed Harry around during the meeting, having "fun" and the way it was all from Harry's POV as he was dozing. Great job on that, I think that this story has so many good scenes. "He wanted to crawl away and hide- perhaps being a baby wasn't so bad after all." Nice build up. Poor Harry.
I love this new turn of events. I loved how Harry woke up and went to Snap eand then Snape helped him with Legilimency. Great job with the attic and the robes not being Sirius'. I really thoughtthat they were. The room only being visible to Harry is interesting- I had thoughtthat it was all a plan of Voldemort, the necklace and the thoughts and everything. Fantasic, great chapter! Great story! Thank you so much for writing and sharing it! :D