Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Diagon Alley 07 Feb 2022 11:32 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear, not a great way to end the outing
Title: Diagon Alley 31 May 2006 12:20 am
Reviewer: Fairycatcher1 (Signed) [Report This]
    love it. nice job. plz dont leave it alone

    Author's Response: thanks, I have an update done, I'm just waiting for my beta to read it...
Title: Diagon Alley 27 May 2006 5:51 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]

    I meant to write this awhile ago, but something happened and the review I wrote was deleted and I had to get to school or work or someother place, and I never wrote another.  So I thought this story started out a little rocky.  I wasn't quite sure where it was going or whatnot.  Anyway I kept reading (so it wasn't bad enough I quit! ;) )  And then it got really funny and cute! So the moral is it is turning out woderfully. keep p the good work. :D  

Title: Diagon Alley 26 May 2006 6:50 pm
Reviewer: WOWZa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story!
    I love how Snape has to make "apperences" and Harry
    just has to go along with it.
    Keep going this is a great story!
    Update soon!
Title: Diagon Alley 23 May 2006 7:47 am
Reviewer: Lynx_LW (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This story is so sweet..=)

    I`ve never liked the stories were Harry is turned into a baby. This one is the first one. It`s so well timed; and the relationship between Snape and Harry so well developed... that I`d be looking forward for your update

    At first I find it a bit humilliating the fact that in his mind Harry was a sixteen years old boy but his body was one of a baby. I think that thats the difference with the others stories; this one is written from Harrys point of view...

    "Stupid old codger, lock me up, feed me sweets. I'm sure that'll do the trick. By the time I face Voldemort I'll be as fat as Dudley. Powers the Dark Lord knows not, yeah right- unless you count the ability to suck on lemon drops." jeje that was so funny =)


    Author's Response: Thanks. I'm trying to keep my story sort of like JK Rowling's, she normally does everything from Harry's pov. Besides I think it helps the reader fell more like Harry, they can worry about what he worries about without knowing everything.

Title: Diagon Alley 22 May 2006 7:37 pm
Reviewer: Ellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Mmmm... I like it. Really like it. It's quite funny with Snape and Harry. Snape is... hehe... he's just Snape and I still love him. What a splendid idea with Harry as a child. Congratulations! Good job!I hope you update really soon. Ellie!
Title: Diagon Alley 21 May 2006 2:15 am
Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Love it!  Please update soon!

     Saphire Starlet

Title: Diagon Alley 20 May 2006 8:07 pm
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]

    I really like this story. It's sweet without being overly gushy, and I like the way Harry can still think for himself though he can't always express it. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Hopefully, you'll stretch it out for a while and not end it too quickly.



    Author's Response: I'm hoping to make my story book length... with one big main bad guy and problems. And then a bunch of little issues along the way. So the story will stretch out for a while...
Title: Diagon Alley 18 May 2006 9:34 am
Reviewer: C. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't believe this is your first story! I am amazed because this is so good! It is really interesting and very original! I can't wait for the next part so please update soon
Title: Diagon Alley 17 May 2006 9:34 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is an incredible story.  You have managed to take some of the more traditional elements of these kinds of stories and make them your own.  I especially like the fact that Harry has his 16 year old mind, but with the physical needs of a baby or child.  This has quickly become one of my favorite stories.

    Author's Response: Thank you. When I started writing this I had only read one other fanfic (AYLNO) so I really didn't know what other fanfics were like.

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