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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ferratilis Potion
Author's Response: thanks, I have an update done, I'm just waiting for my beta to read it...
I meant to write this awhile ago, but something happened and the review I wrote was deleted and I had to get to school or work or someother place, and I never wrote another. So I thought this story started out a little rocky. I wasn't quite sure where it was going or whatnot. Anyway I kept reading (so it wasn't bad enough I quit! ;) ) And then it got really funny and cute! So the moral is it is turning out woderfully. keep p the good work. :D
I love how Snape has to make "apperences" and Harry just has to go along with it. Keep going this is a great story! Update soon!
This story is so sweet..=) I`ve never liked the stories were Harry is turned into a baby. This one is the first one. It`s so well timed; and the relationship between Snape and Harry so well developed... that I`d be looking forward for your update At first I find it a bit humilliating the fact that in his mind Harry was a sixteen years old boy but his body was one of a baby. I think that thats the difference with the others stories; this one is written from Harrys point of view... "Stupid old codger, lock me up, feed me sweets. I'm sure that'll do the trick. By the time I face Voldemort I'll be as fat as Dudley. Powers the Dark Lord knows not, yeah right- unless you count the ability to suck on lemon drops." jeje that was so funny =)
Love it! Please update soon! Saphire Starlet
I really like this story. It's sweet without being overly gushy, and I like the way Harry can still think for himself though he can't always express it. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Hopefully, you'll stretch it out for a while and not end it too quickly. Author's Response: I'm hoping to make my story book length... with one big main bad guy and problems. And then a bunch of little issues along the way. So the story will stretch out for a while...
Author's Response: Thank you. When I started writing this I had only read one other fanfic (AYLNO) so I really didn't know what other fanfics were like. |
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