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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: A Summer's End 07 Feb 2022 11:45 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape staying by Harry’s side was so touching. I hope the progress they’ve made doesn’t all unravel when back in the familiarity of Hogwarts.
Title: A Summer's End 11 Apr 2007 1:41 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Just the usual comments that I love your story - Harry's dependence on Snape is really sweet and well done, and their misunderstanding here at the end of the chapter is v. good. :)

    -K
Title: A Summer's End 09 Jun 2006 10:48 pm
Reviewer: Pokey1984 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent!  I am really looking forward to reading more of this.
Title: A Summer's End 07 Jun 2006 5:02 pm
Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Again another perfect chappy!  I certainly enjoyed reading it! I'm looking forward seeing next chapters!

Title: A Summer's End 07 Jun 2006 2:53 am
Reviewer: Ari (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice work, enjoyed the chapters.  Keep updating.
Title: A Summer's End 04 Jun 2006 10:53 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Great job! I really like this fic but I think we need some more hard core Harry angst and some Harry/Severus bonding. :)

     ~Jan

Title: A Summer's End 01 Jun 2006 4:50 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]

    After slipping on the shirt easily he spent some extra time trying desperately to snap his jeans shut, but the button was just too hard and his little fingers didn't have the strength.

    I left most of my comments at ff.net, but came over here for the second reading.  As a mother of six, I really loved the little detail quoted above.  I don't know how many jeans I have snapped for my kids.

    Smiling to himself he was pleased to see that his t-shirt was black and so was his jumper.

    I also like the subtle way you are showing through Harry's clothing preferences that he is wanting to imitate Snape now--very much as a son wants to look like his father.

    As I have said before, I am loving the creativity of this story.  If you could find a spelling and punctuation beta it would really help the flow of the story, though.

Title: A Summer's End 01 Jun 2006 6:55 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying your story. I hope you will continue to update

    Author's Response: Yes I will continue to update. I get really sad when I read stories only to find out that the author isn't really updating anymore. I will try not to do that to anyone. And if I suddenly decided to stop writing, I would say something.
Title: A Summer's End 31 May 2006 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    I just discovered your story, no idea how I missed it in the first place, so read all in one go. I really like the way you have used deaged Harry to get his relationship with Sev to change. I guess we all have our weaknesses to small kids and thus it is really believable (if we presume Sev is at least partly human) that the relationship would change. Though I would indeed like a story with more Little! Harry in it, I find myself prefering this and think it is a really great lead into a relationship between the two. I have always disliked it when they just jumped into one, with no reasonable/logical explanation as to why they have suddenly changed their minds. I take it this won't be a short story either, great thing that :) Anyways, love it, am looking forward to more, thank you very much!


    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like it. I agree with you on the need to lead into a relationship and I'm really happy that you think my story is doing just that.
Title: A Summer's End 31 May 2006 2:22 pm
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well I liked young Harry and look forward to what you will have him and Snape doing in the future. Hope school goes well for you, and update when you can. Summer is almost here!YEAH!!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I can't wait for the summer!

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