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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ferratilis Potion
-K
Again another perfect chappy! I certainly enjoyed reading it! I'm looking forward seeing next chapters!
Great job! I really like this fic but I think we need some more hard core Harry angst and some Harry/Severus bonding. :) ~Jan
After slipping on the shirt easily he spent some extra time trying desperately to snap his jeans shut, but the button was just too hard and his little fingers didn't have the strength. I left most of my comments at ff.net, but came over here for the second reading. As a mother of six, I really loved the little detail quoted above. I don't know how many jeans I have snapped for my kids. Smiling to himself he was pleased to see that his t-shirt was black and so was his jumper. I also like the subtle way you are showing through Harry's clothing preferences that he is wanting to imitate Snape now--very much as a son wants to look like his father. As I have said before, I am loving the creativity of this story. If you could find a spelling and punctuation beta it would really help the flow of the story, though.
Author's Response: Yes I will continue to update. I get really sad when I read stories only to find out that the author isn't really updating anymore. I will try not to do that to anyone. And if I suddenly decided to stop writing, I would say something.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like it. I agree with you on the need to lead into a relationship and I'm really happy that you think my story is doing just that.
Author's Response: Thanks, I can't wait for the summer! |
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