Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Start of Term 07 Feb 2022 11:54 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter, thank you.
Title: Start of Term 11 Apr 2007 1:52 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. It seems OOC for Malfoy to turn to fisticuffs - I'm thinking of when he swore he was going to duel Harry but really just tricked him into being out at night and sicced Filch on him. It doesn't seem like his style of nasty.

    However, if you were looking to show that Malfoy's evilness has stepped up a notch - or that his courage has - or both - you've picked a good way of showing it.

    -K
Title: Start of Term 27 Jun 2006 12:59 am
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    This is brilliant! I am sooo loving this! *grin* I
    love little ones/deaged fics! I'm impressed, you
    actually managed to write one of these and keep Snape
    in character. Not too easy to do. Brilliant! More
    please! Asap!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like my story. I agree, it is really hard to keep Snape in character in a baby fic. Because the idea that he would be nice to a baby is really "out there."
Title: Start of Term 25 Jun 2006 1:39 pm
Reviewer: Brittany (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked it.. Alot.. Hmm.. Can't thik of anything to say.. I'm a bit tired.. Anyway, I really like your story..

    Author's Response: Thank you.
Title: Start of Term 21 Jun 2006 3:55 pm
Reviewer: trifectamom (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I just found this story and I love it!  Great work!  Looking forward to the next update.

     

Title: Start of Term 16 Jun 2006 4:05 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm fascinated with your story!!!  Yes, it flows better and there are fewer grammar/spelling mistakes.  I feel sorry for Harry and Snape.  Harry needs someone so badly and there is no one for him.  Snape was kinda there for him, but it looks like he has to go back to who and what he was.  I was surprised that Snape did not try to teach him occulumency while he was growing up.  I was also surprised that with his spending time with Snape at different ages that it didn't have some type of effect on how he was growing up.  Anyway, I hope you had a good semester and sorry about the Organic Chemistry.  Those isomers are a bi***.  I also hope you have an excellent memory!

    Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad that you like my story. Oh and I have a horrible memory.
Title: Start of Term 15 Jun 2006 10:11 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I need to figure out what happened to some of the edits we made that disappeared when this was uploaded.  I KNOW I fixed the spelling of Filch's name! ;-)

    Author's Response: Uh oh. I'll try and go fix it.
Title: Start of Term 14 Jun 2006 4:56 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter.  Ron and Hermione are ic.  I'm looking forward to how to have Harry and Snape relate now.  Will we get to the detention next chapter?
Title: Start of Term 14 Jun 2006 2:36 pm
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, but I think he did learn a little respect for Snape over the summer. I'd like Snape to talk with Harry and explain what he thinks is taken for granted.
Title: Start of Term 14 Jun 2006 1:07 pm
Reviewer: curlybean3 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter.  Can't wait to see how classes and detention go.  Can't help but feel sorry for poor Harry.  Things are going to be a bit different between Him and Snape now.  It will be interesting to see how things turn out.

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