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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ferratilis Potion
Do I get ten points? -K
A few typos in a couple of chapters, but nothing bad -- I believe you blotched up Filch's name once and I'm pretty sure it *boomslang* instead of "bloomslang" and a word missing here and there, but otherwise... If I have to guess at the reference to AYLNO, then I'd say - though I coul be way off - that you're referring to the lay-out of the hall in Snape's rooms; that or the 'invisible door.' So, please tell me: how far was I off?
Author's Response: You were in the hospital for a week? I hope you're doing/feeling okay now. Thanks for the review.
I also liked the side note about Ron sending the first Weasley jumper; it was cute that Harry kept it, but was embarrassed to wear it. Awww. Anyway, nice chap. Thanks for the update. Author's Response: I'm glad you noticed the jumper. I felt a little clever about it myself. I was assuming that Harry kept most of his clothes from the past. Because I didn't really feel like trying to explain where he got all the clothes from. I suppose they could come from Molly like all the other clothes.... but eh... glad you like it.
AWWW!!!! Adorable... I loved this chapter... it gave me a nice fuzzy feeling! The ice is broken! Thank you for the chapter! Saphire Starlet Author's Response: Thanks! I was shoting for the "adorable/fuzzy feeling" chapter. I was worried about drifting over into "corny" land or perhaps even "long and boring." Thanks for the encouragement.
Author's Response: Thank you for you continued support and reviews!! I'm glad that you liked Harry reading. I wanted him to pick up a little hobby, to sorta be a kid while Snape took care of things for him.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like my story. I'm also glad that I finally got to them talking out the problem too. |
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