Heavy and well written chapter, thank you.
Title: The Escape
| 06 Oct 2007 2:33 am
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Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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Please, please don't let Sev die! He needs to adopt Harry! Please? PLEASE?
"...as if commenting on the decorum..." I think you mean 'decor', there; decorum is behaviour, usually tactful behaviour; decor is the way a room is decorated.
The death of both of Draco's parents in more or less the same moment is horrific. This was a very powerful, very difficult chapter.
-K
Title: The Escape
| 19 Dec 2006 9:25 pm
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Reviewer: treetop (Anonymous)
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Loved the chapter, was a bit surprised by malfoy...eh and I'm very glad he is dead. Snape has been únconcious for more than a month...that just can't be healthy...please update soon
Author's Response: Lol so true, poor Snape...
Title: The Escape
| 14 Dec 2006 7:57 pm
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Reviewer: jeca (Anonymous)
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Title: The Escape
| 25 Nov 2006 10:49 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Title: The Escape
| 22 Nov 2006 9:37 pm
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Reviewer: .... (Anonymous)
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What a lovely two chapters. I can't wait for more.
Wow. Great chapter, I really did not see Lucius coming to rescue them, that was so unexpected! You did a good job on everything. Poor Draco, he's an orphan now, huh? I would like to see a little more of him afterwards, but right now I'm just worried about Snape recovering soon. i'm glad that Dumbledore is there and that he's holding Snape's hand. Inoticed that Harry kept thinking about Snape, that Snape wouldn't want him to see things, like his injuries, Dumbledore holding his hand. Good job.
Totally awesome chapter. A little redemption for the Malfoys. Well done!
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