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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ferratilis Potion
Really great job of characterization with Severus as a new dad, not knowing how to act around Harry and how to comfort him. I can't remember, were Severus and his dad close or was he abusive in this fic? (They all run together after a time!) But I loved being inside his head, hearing him fuss over Harry (and Draco too, I suppose). I just can't wait to see what kind of relationship emerges between Harry and Severus. Hopefully though too, Harry does open up to him so they can truly be a family...but I don't know what to make of Draco. He's a firecracker and firecrackers (literal and figurative) make me nervous. I can't wait to see more of him, though especially when Severus and Harry return to classes. It's always interesting to see how Severus handles his Slytherins after he betrays Voldemort and every story is different, so I'm looking forward to seeing your point of view! As cautious as I am about Draco, I'm also kinda worried about him. I have a feeling he's going to hurt himself inevetibly through his "friends" and possibly do harm to Severus, the little that we've seen of them together. It was some good thinking on Severus' part to put up wards preventing Harry and more importantly, Draco from doing magic. I absolutly love those closing lines! It's just so Severus, and you're doing an awesome job recreating him in your own view! Keep writing!!
I just love Severus here. He's so protective and loving. It's really endearing how much it means to him to be awarded custody of Harry. And he reminds me of any new father, when he's planning how to care for Harry and to buy him proper clothes and new shoes. Sad, though, that he could think that Harry might just cut Severus out of his life once he's of age. And it shows that he still doesn't know everything about Harry, because I imagine Harry will be utterly devoted to him for the rest of their lives. I'm not sure what to think of Draco right now. Part of me does feel some sympathy for him, but he needs a good smack upside the head, too. Part of me would just like Harry to have Severus to himself, but I am curious to see what you're planning with Draco. I sure hope Severus knows what he's doing with those protective wards, though, cause I'm not sure I trust Draco too much at this point. Looking forward to more! And quickly, pretty, pretty please!!!
I've got one word for you: UPDATE!!!! Please? I'm dying! I just started it yesterday and I love it. Oh please, you have to udpate! What'll it take? I'll do anything to make you update? Please? PLEASE???? I love it so much! Byesies for now, Lady Julie Snape. P.S. UPDATE!! ;-)
OH poor Harry and Severus! How could Severus believe that... that bastard said? You know I love it. Please update when you can. Yours, Lady Julie Snape. |
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