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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ferratilis Potion
I really love the personality of your Snape he is so grumpy…and serious but still you manage to make him act caring in a way….every now and then… It was very funny that bit of teenage angst, I mean when Harry was naked and all that jeje. Oh I know its kind of a cliché but it would have been nice in the argument that arouse during breakfast, when Harry got very angry, to make him shake things as a consequence of a stream of uncontrolled wandless magic, or something of the sort. It wouldn’t be illogical to think of this kind of magic to be linked to emotions…and in your story he has done some… I was quiet surprise by rons reaction, very mature of him. I had a great time reading Harry and Snape´s conversation over the paper work, they have this special chemistry (I don’t have a better word to describe it, at least not in English…: ) between them. I find reassuring that Snape has been thinking ahead and is taking care of everything. Keep writing, so I can keep reading :) Lynx Lw
Gosh, though, if the house itself could move to poison its occupants, you'd think it would've done so before, with Remus or Sirius or any member of the Order, for example. Unless it requires Draco's aid? But if Draco was confined to his quarters until just then, how did he make a poison? (Just happen to have one on him?) Or perhaps there was some sort of passageway that Draco was led to somehow, with the help of the house itself? Ah, well - pointless speculation, I'm sure. I'm still enjoying this immensely! -K
ahhh the tension. ok, seriously, after this gets 'resolved' either harry has to deck draco or draco has do punch harry. you just have to. especially that draco's still being all evil death eater-y. totaly. i love this story
Author's Response: First one to notice! Ever... ssshhhh don't tell anyone...
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