| Title: His Eyes Were Black
| 14 Aug 2010 9:52 am
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| Reviewer: Jen (Anonymous)
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I cried through the entire thing. Well done. You could feel Snape's pain so well, and Dumbledore's too.
Wonderful dramatic monologue, highly engaging and beautifully descriptive. Your writing has an almost magnetic charm.
| Title: His Eyes Were Black
| 07 Jun 2006 4:57 pm
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| Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous)
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Out of boredom? Well, I really like you imagination and style! REally enjoyable piece of text! Since fifth book my eyes opened concerning Severus and there's no way back to old where I didn't like him. My guess is that you have Severus just exactly right how he always was, the truth. I¨'m looking forward to see any other fics from you.
Wow I liked that a lot. I keep remembering in book six where Harry calls Snape a coward... poor Snape- all that he has to do and no one trusts him (well except for Dumbledore who's dead now T_T). I like how in your story how you showed that Snape slowly lost himself... through his eyes. It makes me feel sad.
| Title: His Eyes Were Black
| 02 Jun 2006 11:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Laura (Anonymous)
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Wow I really liked it. I hope that this is what JK Rowling has in mind for that incident. I just don't want to believe that Snape could be evil... But well anyway, back to your story, it was very good.
| Title: His Eyes Were Black
| 02 Jun 2006 11:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Savemeemma (Anonymous)
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Really like it! Keep writing.
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