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Reviews For Poison
Regarding the damage caused by the poison: kidney damage would be much more likely than lung damage for a poison taken internally. (sorry, working in the medical field that just sort of jumped out at me.) aside from that, overall a good story.
I must tell you this: Dudley can´t possibly be sentence to a lifetime in prison; he is a minor it`s against the muggle law ;) Apart from that, it`s a nice story :) |
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