Aww! Harry's got godparents now, and Lucius and Narcissa seem to be actually very nice, and Draco too! That makes me so happy! And Severus is a good brother...a bit sour at times, but he hadn't expected this at all! And I like his protectivness when Dumbles came. And he's not very clingy and lets Harry - Silas do what he wants. And Silas likes potions! XD Too cute! Very very good!
| Title: The Friends
| 20 Jul 2006 9:03 am
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| Reviewer: violet (Anonymous)
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very interesting story, i look forward to seeing where you go with this. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks!
| Title: The Friends
| 16 Jul 2006 1:30 am
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| Reviewer: Flamegirl (Anonymous)
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uh oh. that doesn't sound good. i hope severus isn't too hard on him.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
This is an interesting take on the Guardian!Snape genre. I'm curious to read more. One note though - you've switched back and forth between "Silias" and "Silas" -while I assume that you mean the latter, the former is shows up more often.
I look forward to seeing the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, I meant Silas. I'm going to change that right away . . .
Good beginning, I think that this is a nice original idea, and well-written so far ... I hope that you will write more soon so that we can see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
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