| Title: The Conclusion
| 27 Mar 2007 3:09 am
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| Reviewer: CheddarTrek (Anonymous)
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This is a really great story! I love the way you have characterized Severus. You've really managed to keep him in character, but still be this sort of person. It's amazing.
I would like to see Harry have a little more interaction with Gryffindor and Hufflepuff, but since you did say once that Silas/Harry wanted that... Well, I guess it'll come up sooner or later.
Again, brilliant job so far. Please keep up the great work. I love your Severus, really. He's a good brother/gaurdian in pretty much every way. Good at comforting Silas, getting him things, but not letting him get away with too much.
I am curious what he'll do the next time Silas really needs to be disciplined though. I wouldn't mind seeing that... Perhaps at the end of the year? Philosopher's Stone still around? Heh, guess we'll see.
Cheers
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: The Conclusion
| 20 Mar 2007 2:03 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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There was a lot of important information bandied about in the text today. From the view of the pensieve, it seems the Chimera was not real, or at least that would explain how it dissapeared. But then, how could it be in the department of mysteries? The argument over accidental magic is still unsettled, but that's what makes stories interesting; continuing story lines. I can't help thinking that something important is just around the next update.
Oh good. From your chapter title I thought the story might be done, glad it isn't. Can't wait for more of the mystery!
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