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Reviews For Child's Play
-P.G.
I just thought that I would point out that you are not using th quotation marks right. ' '<<< those are not correct. " " <<< these are. " " << those are usued when someone is speaking and ' ' are usually used in the place of italics to show thinking or they are used with in speach when someone says something that someone else told them to say. Author's Response: I have corrected them in later chapters. Though, I would just like to point out that in all JK Rowling's book she uses single quotation marks and no quotation marks for thoughts. As far as I undesrand it, at least in Britain (maybe America is different) either is acceptable as long as if you use the " " marks you use the ' ' when quoting inside and vice versa.
I really like the fact that Draco is behind this and that he is actually in trouble because of it- not in trouble with the teachers but more that he's in trouble trouble, with his father and other people finding out more like a real event and not just a simple straight forward event. I love how willfull Harry is. :) Great spirit. |
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