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Reviews For Child's Play
Title: Beards and Funny White Hats 06 Jun 2009 6:36 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe! I like how we get to see things from baby Harry's point of view--very interesting!

    -P.G.
Title: Beards and Funny White Hats 15 May 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter amused me immensely.
Title: Beards and Funny White Hats 10 Aug 2008 8:32 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    great beginning. i really have to be in a mood to read a deaging (sp?) story, but this one was recommended so i figured I'd give it a shot. so far, i'm glad i did. yay harry.
Title: Beards and Funny White Hats 13 Aug 2006 5:04 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I just thought that I would point out that you are not using th quotation marks right. ' '<<< those are not correct. " " <<< these are. " " << those are usued when someone is speaking and ' ' are usually used in the place of italics to show thinking or they are  used with in speach when someone says something that someone else told them to say.



    Author's Response: I have corrected them in later chapters. Though, I would just like to point out that in all JK Rowling's book she uses single quotation marks and no quotation marks for thoughts. As far as I undesrand it, at least in Britain (maybe America is different) either is acceptable as long as if you use the " " marks you use the ' ' when quoting inside and vice versa.
Title: Beards and Funny White Hats 09 Aug 2006 11:27 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    I really like the fact that Draco is behind this and that he is actually in trouble because of it- not in trouble with the teachers but more that he's in trouble trouble, with his father and other people finding out more like a real event and not just a simple straight forward event.

    I love how willfull Harry is. :) Great spirit.


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