| Title: Bedtime Fun
| 30 Jul 2020 2:47 am
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| Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Wonderful. Very emotive. Please carry on.
‘Snape,’ he said clearly.
A thin eyebrow arched on Snape’s pallid face.
‘Snape, Snape, Snape, Snape …’
‘Alright Potter, I heard you the first time,’ Snape said scathingly.
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This bit made me nearly hyperventilate from laughter.
toddlers are a tricky thing. i've got a niece, 2 and a half. she's a bugger... i think you captured harry just perfect. funny to see inside the head of a kid.
I love Harry's little tantrum and the way Snape made him drink his bottle. His stuffed canary is so cute, especially at the end when Snape gave it back to him and Harry settled. Adorable story!! And how Harry wondered if Snape was playing hide and go seek, how he called out for Snape and then Snape's voice came out of the darkness "Go to sleep, Potter." Very real life there, great portrayal!
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